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Summer Fun

Soap bubbles float through mid-school breeze that crack our giggles, to the playful night, we dab the sheen film on oak trees or glue bobbed orbs on crushes’ kites And vapor-like, our summers warmly wrap the peek-a-boos squeaking tag games on moonlit field where foams eavesdrop; inviting tricks without a shame Long days collect more popping sprees as sticky piles knot in our hair like wiggles on tanned sun, how free to mess around till burnt cheeks tear The madness of young summer brings under red stars, I feel her bubbles sing. Contest: SKat-Oz's Summer Poems

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Date: 7/27/2013 5:49:00 AM
Nette you never disappoint. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/25/2013 9:56:00 PM
hello, NETTE the poem is hot and Awesome... congrats with your summer time poem...love Linda
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Date: 7/25/2013 12:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot nette xx
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Date: 7/24/2013 3:18:00 PM
'The madness of young summer' sums this beauty up perfectly Nette...Most of the ones I have read so far are about childhood memories when we lived fancy-free and totally in the present...such a difficult thing to do as adults...I am working on another footle series poking fun at fellow Soupers and you will be included... WARNING: I shall show no mercy...
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Date: 7/24/2013 1:32:00 PM
Nette, a lovely gift of a poem. Thank you for the support my contest. Stop by and enjoy my blog: (A Lavender Day-- summer contest) winners. Have yourself an awesome day. LUV ~SKAT ....
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Date: 9/19/2012 11:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Craig's "Summer Fun" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/15/2012 11:20:00 PM
Nette, a wonderful congratulations with your awesome win in craig cornish's " Summer Fun " Xool contest. ~ :-) take care* PD
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Date: 9/15/2012 12:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your GRAND WIN nette!!! You're indeed a great poet!! :)
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Date: 9/14/2012 9:05:00 PM
Just lovely, I see the bubbles sing too. Well done and congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 9/14/2012 7:54:00 AM
Summer took on a whole new and very interesting personality with your poetry paintbrush, Nette...you squeezed the fun out of each and every long summer's day...very much enjoyed your golden win! gwendolen
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Date: 9/13/2012 10:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your big win Nette. Cheers!!
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Date: 9/13/2012 8:58:00 AM
Congratulations nette, so wonderful! My senses are teased. Cynthia
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Date: 9/13/2012 7:06:00 AM
A rambling romp threw a whirlwind summer. Congrad's on your win. Thanks for the emories! Light & Love
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Date: 9/13/2012 2:33:00 AM
Nette, Nette....this one belongs at the top. I just loved it. Congratulations on your wonderful win!
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Date: 9/13/2012 2:04:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/12/2012 8:25:00 PM
lovely portrait of those sunny funny days.Wow, congrats on your top spot, Nette. Well done.
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Date: 9/12/2012 8:14:00 PM
You are a one-of-a-kind gifted poet, Nette! Your words flow like honey. Congrats on a super first place win! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 9/12/2012 7:44:00 PM
Congratulations nette, what a lovely summer xx
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Date: 9/12/2012 7:11:00 PM
Congratulations Nette on your big win with your carefree summer fun poem. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/8/2012 10:01:00 AM
Nice Piece Nette...
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Date: 9/4/2012 10:03:00 AM
This sounds so delightful....I can hear the giggles !!
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Date: 9/3/2012 5:32:00 PM
Reads like a winning entry..Very poetic entry..Enjoyed reading ..Thanks for stopping by..I had to look up text symbols to write that work for I don't text..Sara
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Date: 9/3/2012 5:03:00 PM
I hear it, feel it, see it! Lovely! Cynthia
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Date: 9/3/2012 4:50:00 PM
Summer is over and the fall leaves are turning gold and falling. Wish it was summer again and love your poem on summer fun. love phyl
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Date: 9/3/2012 3:22:00 PM
This is a perfect poem for the summer! This describes the fun we all have experienced at one point or another in the summer! I just loved this wonderful Hot summer delight you have penned here my friend! What a fabulous poem, Great Work!!
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