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Summer Evening

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Below is the poem entitled Summer Evening which was written by poet Barbara Gorelick. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Summer Evening

 

sitting on the step
spitting watermelon seeds 
song of the crickets

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  1. That Archaic Poet Avatar
    Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 8/21/2013 9:22:00 AM
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    The ironic thing is that I loath haikus, but I have read several on here that have changed my mind about the genre. For a brief moment, I was on the front porch with watermelon juice running down my chin, spitting seeds with you with a chorus of crickets in the background. Really a lovely read. I live in the foothills of the Appalachian mountains, so I agree with Mitch; love the country feel. Kudos for writing something that has helped change my mind (which isn't easy to do lol). :)
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    Mitch White
    Date: 7/16/2013 11:31:00 PM
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    Love the country Haiku, sounds so nice
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 7/6/2013 11:43:00 PM
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    a wonderful haiku * thank you for sharing. Linda
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 7/4/2013 10:15:00 AM
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    wow, this is GOOD haiku. Happy fourth of July, sweetie