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Summer Evening

sitting on the step spitting watermelon seeds song of the crickets

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  1. Date: 8/21/2013 9:22:00 AM
    The ironic thing is that I loath haikus, but I have read several on here that have changed my mind about the genre. For a brief moment, I was on the front porch with watermelon juice running down my chin, spitting seeds with you with a chorus of crickets in the background. Really a lovely read. I live in the foothills of the Appalachian mountains, so I agree with Mitch; love the country feel. Kudos for writing something that has helped change my mind (which isn't easy to do lol). :)

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 11:31:00 PM
    Love the country Haiku, sounds so nice

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 11:43:00 PM
    a wonderful haiku * thank you for sharing. Linda

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 10:15:00 AM
    wow, this is GOOD haiku. Happy fourth of July, sweetie