Summer Crown

Winter forgotten Sunbeams undressed cloudy sky Summer wears its crown (c) Demetrios Trifiatis 19 June 2016

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Bl Devnath

Date: 6/22/2016 12:28:00 PM

Beautiful picture of summer nature. A 7. Loved always my lovely genius friend. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2016 3:53:00 PM

you need to do more haiku. this is a wowser

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/21/2016 5:52:00 AM

I have followed your advise! Visit! Thank you!

Tom Quigley

Date: 6/19/2016 8:48:00 PM

Very nice, Demetrios! I love the way clouds melt away in the sun.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/20/2016 5:17:00 AM

Thank you so much dear, Tom, for your precious visit and comment!

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 6/19/2016 8:41:00 AM

Oh I wish. Winter is very much in here, with cold mornings, and dark skies. Though we do occasionally get those beautiful crisp winter days, the gems that they are. Much like your words above.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/19/2016 4:06:00 PM

Yes, I know very well the weather there my friend, scott. Unfortunately I cannot change it but you always could visit Greece if you can stand the heat. Yesterday we had 40 today 42! Thank you for your visit and lovely comment!

Jan Allison

Date: 6/19/2016 7:18:00 AM

absolutely delightful - long may the sun reign:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/19/2016 4:00:00 PM

Here in Greece we have full summer for over six months, sometimes more! I remember years started bathing in the sea end of March and went on till November! Thank you, Jan! Hugs xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/19/2016 6:55:00 AM

- Summer time is so short in Norway, I have always winter in my thoughts - but enjoying every day the sun shines :) - Beautifully written, my friend :) - A 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/19/2016 4:03:00 PM

Summers in Greece are too long, so whenever you bored with the weather there you can always visit Greece! Thank you so much for your precious visit!