Suicidal

Suicidal! his own problem The wrought of his failures Reducing himself His deceiving pleasures The trials And temptations He succumbed The remorse His down fall! Leading to his back fall All is himself Self war Suicidal! By: Charles melody (Lightning ink).

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Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Date: 9/18/2011 2:14:00 PM

this is great Charles... "Self War"...great description...thanks for sharing my friend... i look forward to reading more of your great writes...smiles....Chiquita

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 4/29/2011 12:47:00 AM

Touchy subject. I may need to re read this one. I like the poem, Could you expand on it to me. I would love to think I am wrong about this one! ~JSLambert

Charles Melody Lightning Ink
Date: 6/17/2011 7:55:00 AM

OK, IT TALKS ABOUT SOME PEOPLE WHO CAUSE THEIR OWN DOWN FALL.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/17/2011 8:11:00 AM

hello, Charles,, nice to see you comment on my poem,, How are you?? well i know this strong deep feeling,, when the world comes crashing down,, sure enjoyed,..p.d.

Charles Melody Lightning Ink
Date: 6/17/2011 7:56:00 AM

THANKS PD, I POSTED A NEW POEM AND GUESS WHAT? U ARE IN IT.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/17/2011 7:15:00 AM

It is the point where a person feels he has no where to turn and should seek help. It is a sad thing in life when someone decides to take this road for problems can be solved and resolved. It is a war within itself but one that has to be won. love mom

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/16/2011 4:35:00 PM

Yes, he wrought this through his own failures. It's mostly from our mistakes that these feelings would start to emerge.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/16/2011 3:07:00 PM

Self War ..so true .. this is how suicide has risen so everywhere .. your words speak volumes to this ongoing problem Charles and a true picture of the process luv.. thankxxx for sharing ..luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/16/2011 10:54:00 AM

We do feel battles within ourselves sometimes, dear son, but suicide is never the answer. I pray you are not having such thoughts. If people turned to suicide every time the feel they have failed, there would be no one left to enjoy Earth's bounty. Love, "mum"

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/16/2011 9:40:00 AM

Good idea..Yes, when we war within ourselves it is like a slow suicide...Sara