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written 3rd Nov 2001

This future.. I can not bare
 so why do.. I still care..

The torture 'still' lives
 but there's 'nothing', left to forgive

The hurt, and the, pain..
 now it, all feels the same

My "love".. for my kid's
 'is', the only reason I still.. live

This life... I would love to end
 for there is, 'nothing else'.. I can mend..

"Push" me a little..
   I appear to be, 'a little apathy'... Stuck, 'here'...subdued

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  1. Date: 6/30/2013 4:46:00 PM
    a nicely written couplet.

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 12:58:00 AM
    Very nicely put, I enjoyed peter

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 9:47:00 AM
    Tremendous lines. Life surely has improved since the origin of this writing? Either way, well done!