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Stressed

Serious labour, we get boreD Though the task, burdensomE Real struggle... they oppresS Enlivened thus, our progresS Soon, with us they'll jubilatE Sure now, theirs the poweR Eventual desserts, we awaiT Delectation upon the stresS

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/17/2020 1:53:00 PM

Nice wordsmithing!

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 8/18/2020 1:22:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words dear Kim. Much love, Adeniji.

Verlecia Fields

Date: 1/9/2020 10:09:00 PM

I think kindness is much more interesting, great way of putting it.

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 1/13/2020 9:42:00 AM

Thank you dear Verlecia. Much love, Adeniji.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/19/2019 10:02:00 AM

How clever, so much thought was put into this piece.

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 7/19/2019 3:12:00 PM

Thanks very much dear Richard. Best wishes always, Adeniji.

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/18/2019 4:00:00 PM

This double acrostic is quite witty, Adeniji. Well done.

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 7/18/2019 4:08:00 PM

Really? Appreciations to you Gauthier. Best regards, Adeniji.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/18/2019 11:12:00 AM

Great Acrostic..,hurrah Panagiota

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 7/18/2019 4:07:00 PM

Thank you, Panagiota. Much love, Adeniji

Jan Allison

Date: 7/18/2019 8:11:00 AM

wow an incredible poem - a double acrostic with end rhyme- Bravo Adeniji:-) hugs Jan xx

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 7/18/2019 10:30:00 AM

Thank you Allison. Much love, Adeniji

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/18/2019 7:44:00 AM

Admirable double Acrostic!!! Much impressed my friend, Adeniji! Bravo!

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 7/18/2019 8:04:00 AM

Thank you dear Demetrios. Much love, Adeniji

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 7/18/2019 8:04:00 AM

Thank you dear Demetrios. Much love, Adeniji