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I sat with a reluctant story teller my legs crossed holding my breath The fabric of her mind was tightly folded tucked in carefully at her edges I reached for a thread gave it a gentle tug hoping that it would come loose My desire was to know her secrets Her's was the ability I so desperately desired She smiled a knowing smile Looked deeply into my eyes I gazed back resolutely Searching for my prize She whispered "Come close within my hands I hold the ghosts They scream with force to be released You will not be protected by your Priest I'm trying my best to hold them back If they escape they will attack!" My childish wonder turned to fear Could real Ghosts have followed her here As I wondered she began to laugh Within my soul I felt a draft I got my wish Storied spirits grabbed hold I could not handle the tales she told So I ran through the forest Spirits close behind sang a chorus "We are released our stories are yours Fly with us through hidden doors The forest our home a magical place we knit our spells with silvered lace!" Her thread had attached firmly to my mind The desire within had rendered me blind The reluctant story teller she knew me best deep down convinced I'd fail her test As the fabric unraveled I absorbed her pain Those silvered threads now formed a chain The ghostly spirits wrapped links round my soul My eyes of blue turned black as coal Nothing was left of earlier me I became like the one I wished to be I am the Reluctant Story Teller The fabric of my mind tightly folded tucked in at my edges You sit cross legged holding your breath You pull at a single thread hoping my fabric will unravel You desire to know my secrets "Come a little closer so that I might whisper in your ear, I have stories to tell!" Dedicated to my Friend Vicky a story teller Extrodinaire.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/13/2016 11:01:00 AM
II loved that!!! Very nice!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/13/2016 12:27:00 PM
Thanks Chelcie.
Date: 8/6/2016 2:33:00 PM
Hi Richard, excellent dedication. You have lost none of your story telling skill, in fact it has become enhanced,This one has such wonderful content. You have went from strength to strength with your poetry Richard. This is a definite seven and a fave....Mike.
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Date: 7/28/2016 11:08:00 AM
That was a really great read and a great dedication.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/28/2016 11:50:00 AM
Thanks Ron.;0)
Date: 7/18/2016 10:35:00 AM
Beautifully woven piece... Your friend must be very proud of you and Happy with the dedication.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/20/2016 11:52:00 PM
Thanks Carol.
Date: 7/17/2016 2:59:00 PM
A fine story teller you have become, your magic weaves in every word.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/20/2016 11:52:00 PM
Thanks Scott.
Date: 7/16/2016 11:16:00 AM
wowowow, Richard. what an imaginative way to spin a tale about a tale spinner!!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/16/2016 1:13:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, I'm pleased you enjoyed it.
Date: 7/16/2016 12:15:00 AM
Amazing, marvelous story. Held me captive til' the very end
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/16/2016 8:33:00 AM
Thanks R.A. ;0)
Date: 7/15/2016 9:20:00 PM
This poem a story in itself, its funny I just finished reading a book by a Canadian Author called Ysabel, and this poem reminded me of the book! Great write!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/15/2016 11:22:00 PM
Thanks Arthur, Viv gave me a video to look up because it reminded him of a song. It is interesting that the piece remiss different people of different things.
Date: 7/15/2016 8:42:00 PM
Amazing, I was caught by the threads and every word was magic as the story appeared before my eyes, this could easily be a television show, great story telling yourself there x
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/15/2016 11:23:00 PM
Thanks Casarah, it was a fun one to write. Hugs Rick.
Date: 7/13/2016 12:09:00 AM
Enchanting, and sinister, Richard. Reminded me of a song by Jonathon Kelly, called the 'Ballad of cursed Anna'. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nFHM5msfP9o Regards, Viv
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/13/2016 5:13:00 AM
What a great song! I enjoyed his voice and the video. Thanks for directing me to it Viv.
Date: 7/11/2016 10:08:00 AM
Love the way you brought it full circle. I will sit at your feet and enjoy the tales you weave. Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/12/2016 12:24:00 AM
Thanks Eileen, I wrote this one in 2013 but made a number of changes to it.
Date: 7/11/2016 5:16:00 AM
The only disappointment my friend, Richard, was that the story ended! A seven my friend!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/11/2016 7:03:00 AM
Thanks Demetrios.;0) I'm pleased you enjoyed it.
Date: 7/10/2016 7:58:00 PM
Your tales just keep getting better and better You get a big 7 from me. Love Mom
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/11/2016 12:36:00 AM
I like be you too mom! I'm glad you like this one.
Date: 7/10/2016 5:28:00 PM
Vicky certainly inspired you Richard, a poetic dedication that one just wanted to go on and on...one day hopefully it will...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/11/2016 12:37:00 AM
Thanks Harry, a much appreciated comment and visit.
Date: 7/10/2016 10:50:00 AM
Seeker watch out...Richards in town...well done my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/10/2016 11:01:00 AM
Thanks Winged Warrior, blessings to you as well.
Date: 7/10/2016 7:49:00 AM
Wow... another amazing story. Have a great day.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/10/2016 10:06:00 AM
You as well Tim.
Date: 7/10/2016 12:52:00 AM
Love love this one Rick : )..
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/10/2016 10:08:00 AM
Hi Charmaine Give it another read, it's now finished. Hugs Rick.

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