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Below is the poem entitled STORMY LUNE which was written by poet Rick Zablocki. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Darkened skies green tinged
Trees bent down
Branches cover streets

Heavens part, flooding
Here then gone
Nature rolls forward

For Debbie's Contest 
The form is a Lune. 

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  1. Date: 8/21/2013 1:15:00 PM
    beautiful from all views..... SKAT

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 3:11:00 PM
    I like this Rick...Linda

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 2:58:00 PM
    Good wishes for a win with these pretty lines. Thank you for your kind comments on my poetry. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 1:44:00 PM
    great images ran across this page.. very stimulating read..:) huggs

  1. Date: 6/3/2013 5:54:00 PM
    gosh, I did not know she had this contest going on. WEll, good for you doing a poem so quickly and good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 6/3/2013 8:03:00 AM
    Your words speak volumes.

  1. Date: 6/2/2013 5:55:00 AM
    This is an incredible write my friend, I really enjoyed reading it this morning! I have just one little helpful observation...the second line in the first verse has four syllables and should be three. Over has two syllables. This is just a friendly reminder, I want you to place high as this poem is very good and really will do quite well in her contest as she loves this type of poem! Try wording the line, "Trees bent down" or something like that! I mean no disrespect, I hope you aren't offended!

    Zablocki Avatar Rick Zablocki
    Date: 6/3/2013 8:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Not at all. Thank you my friend for your help and support.
  1. Date: 6/2/2013 5:03:00 AM
    its what's not said a wealth hidden in this lovely poem Shadow