Stop

Stop wasting your presence If is of no essence What a precious resource? Don't attend If it's just to pretend Why paste your picture amidst the vultures? Irrespective of the culture

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Khalid Darwish

Date: 9/4/2012 4:41:00 PM

Short lovely piece! Keep up

Fisayo Aderounmu
Date: 10/4/2012 3:03:00 AM

Khalid thanks for reading for my poem.

Samia Ali Salama

Date: 6/2/2012 1:37:00 PM

Very interesting poem Fisayo! I like it very much ...Samia

Fisayo Aderounmu
Date: 6/29/2012 1:53:00 PM

Thanks Samia.

Ann Roske

Date: 5/16/2012 11:56:00 AM

Great piece! Thanks for visiting my poem.

Fisayo Aderounmu
Date: 6/29/2012 1:55:00 PM

Thanks Ann.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/15/2012 11:56:00 AM

Well done "Stop", like it. - Thank you for visit my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Fisayo Aderounmu
Date: 5/16/2013 10:23:00 AM

Thanks

Maureen Lefanue

Date: 5/11/2012 12:48:00 AM

Hi Fisayo, Glad you enjoyed my poem. Enjoyed your rhyme. You are so right - pretence has no purpose. God bless, Maureen

Fisayo Aderounmu
Date: 5/16/2013 10:23:00 AM

God bless you Maureen.

Shirley Long

Date: 3/26/2012 6:22:00 PM

Well=written poem, I enjoyed reading it.

Fisayo Aderounmu
Date: 3/27/2012 11:05:00 AM

Thanks a lot long, for taking a bite. Cheerio.