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Stimulant

Feeling I got so doubtless Which absorb me as delicious Which I belief one can't do sans It has helped me a lot of times Passion for progress How would success comes one's means Sans this feeling so immense How would one pursue great things Sans this feelings so immense Outweigh only inflicts mind and sense Which might spit venomous abscess As the Mozanbique spits its Venom. I greedily read some poets who their works seem voluptuous As cute stuffs in elegant dresses Which often drag me to put more effects Upon my process Passion is a stimulant that empowers or gears A person toward great things Of this Mother earth and of Holy place However it depends on how its get one's hands. 9/8/2015 Note: for a person to have the right hand of the Might or the other, he needs passion to imitate either HIS Prophets deeds or other prophets.

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Date: 11/16/2015 9:30:00 AM
Stimulation helps us to get on, and to better what we do or aim to achieve in life. Reading the work of others can inspire us to raise our level. The world we live in and the One who created it both fill us with passion. Regards // paul
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Date: 9/9/2015 7:22:00 AM
I love the idea of poems being voluptuous. Great words my friend.
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Date: 9/8/2015 11:48:00 PM
yes, yes, Afolabi. Passion for one's life and one's work is EVERYTHING. Great topic you discussed with your poem, my friend.
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Date: 9/8/2015 10:44:00 PM
I see a true poet writing from the heart.. Life beats us and later if we are lucky it treats us. Hold the hope my friend. Keep on writing and someday , the sun will shine and the sky shout out -- you are free to live yet again! A solid 7 on this deep and intense poem.
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Date: 9/8/2015 8:20:00 PM
Afolabi, this is well said.. Thanks for sharing these emotions with us. Each line seems to come deep from within you.... Linda
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Date: 9/8/2015 5:24:00 AM
My friend, A.M., I do not perceive you as jealous of other's successes. Jealousy, as I understand it, has negative connotations therefore it would be better to find a more appropriate word, with positive denotation. Yes, your message is clear that is why I say "Jealousy" doesn't fit. A very good idea developed that passes a message!
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 9/8/2015 10:10:00 AM
Thank you very much dear poet I appreciate your hand. You see I tend to know that word until I lost within, but thanks you found me before I go beyond. I have done some changes hope it's okay... Bless.......A.M.
Date: 9/8/2015 2:18:00 AM
Nice effort Afolabi
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 9/8/2015 9:17:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment......A.M.

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