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Stars I Have Loved

STARS I HAVE LOVED No constellations above city haze, No familiar groupings…all obscured. Below, there are new groupings New constellations - city offerings. Police car comets, mosque moons : Replacements for real life. Orion, Gemini , Auriga gone. Your stars twinkled. These don’t. Supermarket, metro, gas stations, Stare unrelentingly all night long. The aurora is gone - the city took it. City takes ; city gives back. The city is god - at night. As real stars fade with the dawn’s delight, Fade too do these new stars, As sun comes up with his daily daylight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/16/2010 12:08:00 PM
In large cities they no longer see the stars due to pollution in the cities. I love to star gaze and we had a telescope that went with our son when he left home. How awesome to see Jupiter's 4 moons and the craters on the moon and Orions belt and all the wonders out there. Enjoyed this write. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 10/16/2010 4:52:00 AM
Cool write on stars and life...Michael
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Date: 10/16/2010 4:48:00 AM
Very awesome write on stars I have loved, Sydney
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