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Starlight in My Tresses

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Starlight in My Tresses

They would appear it was close to the hour, I waited holding my breath; Millions I see, the waves upon the sea, To unfurl the view ahead. The playful wind thumped on my shoulder, Under their freezing touch I shivered; They came, stars in herds, Showers of silver descending on the water. Playing over the waves they spread Their glitter all over the sea; On a frosty cold night, a crystal silhouette night, They spy, their impish eyes on me. I stepped into the water, In my tiny hands to gather Silver dust sticking all over my dress; As I return with starlight in my tresses. .. Honorable Mention Category ~ Surreal For the Contest : "Real, UNreal and SURreal" Sponsored by Debbie Guzzi

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  1. Date: 6/11/2011 7:10:00 PM
    I came back to reread this one and decided it was starlight, just as the title suggested. The impish eyes part had made me think they were fish. haha. This is so beautiful. I am gona make you one of my fave poets as well!

  1. Date: 5/25/2011 6:27:00 AM
    I am stopping by to read some of your amazing poetry today and I wish to thank you for commenting on my poetry. I hope you have a wonderful day filled with much inspiration Gautami. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 4:43:00 PM
    Way to go Gautami, Congratulations on your success in the winner circle. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 1:12:00 PM
    Cngratulations on the HM in the contest of Deb, Gautami

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 11:46:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in the contest Gautami. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 9:53:00 AM
    Many congrats on your win, Gautami : )

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 7:55:00 AM
    Congrats on your HM Gautami in Debbie's contest for this excellent entry my friend.. enjoy your special honor with luv..

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 7:29:00 AM
    This is enchantingly lovely Gautami. Many warm congrats for this terrific write

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 9:54:00 AM
    Such an enchanting read. With an experience like that, you wouldn't need those shampoos that promise really shiny hair! Kidding aside, thanks for sharing this, I enjoyed reading this very beautiful piece.

  1. Date: 4/15/2011 5:10:00 AM
    Gautami it sounds like paradise on Earth and the climate is just my style luv.. the names are so exotic and inviting.. save some of those stars for my blond tresses as well as yours luv.. feeling them glowing now...

  1. Date: 4/14/2011 11:52:00 AM
    Thanks friends. Andrea those are the stars showering down from the sky.Next in series after 'star sand' similar theme.Linda I welcome you to my place,I live in central India now.But we can go together to Assam in the northeast-my native place and adjacent state Arunachal, there we have orchids in abundance.It would be fun.Love, Gautami

  1. Date: 4/14/2011 11:16:00 AM
    A melodious poem!!

  1. Date: 4/13/2011 10:51:00 PM
    are they starfish? this is really an interesting poem and so niely done.

  1. Date: 4/13/2011 1:36:00 PM
    magical and poetic, Gautami

  1. Date: 4/13/2011 12:33:00 PM
    So mesmerizing are your lines Gautami .. I am captivated by this charming essence of words luv.. and am on first plane to your native land to see those lovely orchids u speak of.. may I ask whre u live luv? such a breathtaking flower .. lovely as the Starlight in your tresses... if for the contest .. good luck ...

  1. Date: 4/13/2011 11:23:00 AM
    Smile, *^_^* I love this magical moment amid poe's mesmerizing verse. = I could envision the dreamful scenario as if I were there; a sign of a lovely and gifted poetess. == And, I would Imagine also that you yourself looked absolutely beautiful while as glitterings stardust reflected within your precious eyes. === love always, jasper