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Stardust Fell Down

Blue midnight sky is blanketed with twinkling stars And once in awhile some stardust falls from heaven afar Some gold stardust fell when God sent me precious you His magnificent Son who made a glorious debut Remarkable entrance into this sin cursed earth A tiny baby, incarnate God, that Mary did birth Awe inspiring miracle, when Jesus came down Someday we'll see Him in His full glory wearing His crown Something called Poulter's Measure Couplets where the first line in a couplet is 12 syllables And the second line in a couplet is 14..Like years ago a person who raised chickens and had hens that were layers would sell the eggs for cash or barter.. Sometimes they would give 12 eggs or a dozen then if the hens were laying good they sometimes would give 14 instead of the dozen.. Sponsor: Gail Angel Doyle Contest: Blanket Of Stardust Written this eleventh day of January 2013 Penned by: Sara Kendrick Finis'

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Date: 1/25/2013 4:18:00 PM
Unique piece and style....Congrats on your superb win,Sara...Keep going ,pal...
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Date: 1/24/2013 7:17:00 PM
A lovely read this morning your winning poem, Sara. Very inspiring to live with the word of God. (^_^)
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Date: 1/24/2013 3:09:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/23/2013 7:51:00 PM
Nicely done Sara. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/23/2013 12:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your deserving win, Sara! Beautiful! I pray that you're doing well. Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/23/2013 11:29:00 AM
What a gift that was to all of us...that one Great Star !! Love this !! Congrats on your worthy win !!
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Date: 1/23/2013 2:31:00 AM
Congratulations Sara luv. xx
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Date: 1/13/2013 3:18:00 PM
beautiful write indeed, my friend
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Date: 1/12/2013 9:52:00 AM
An awesome write on this poem Sara. How are you. I seen your name and just had to get in a quick hello. Hope things have improved for you. love phyl
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Date: 1/11/2013 3:12:00 PM
Wow, what an incredible write my friend! You have bestowed upon me great blessings with this faithful poem! I agree with your write completely and wholeheartedly! What a delightful piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 1/11/2013 1:31:00 PM
I ednjoyed the comment you added, Sarah. nice poem too
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Date: 1/11/2013 10:23:00 AM
Should be an excellent poem... love what you have so far.
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Debra Squyres
Date: 1/11/2013 11:19:00 AM
Excellent finish !! I plan to see that crown. I think I need to revisit my forms on couplets. I wasn't aware of a syllable count. I might have to rename mine Rhyme instead of couplet.

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