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Star Gazer

These three magic rocks, I hold tight in my hand Rolling them over, now, what could I plan? Leave my reality? A new opportunity? How should I use them? The power they hold... Can they take me away, as I have been told To magical places, ...to far-away lands?.. But oh the dilemma, how can I choose? A place where I could leave all my worries behind? As I stood there and pondered, under a star filled sky Searching my heart, to find peace of mind One star caught my eye, as it dangled so bright... And I knew.... I must visit the heavens tonight! Closing my eyes, I made a wish on the stones In a gust of wind, I was no longer alone Suddenly appeared was a heavenly tree Up through the branches were stair steps for me! I climbed up the limbs, as it reached for the sky I climbed and clung, as I climbed up so high.. Below the horizon stretched and grew Till the earth swung free in a tide of blue Weary and stiff, but fiercely proud I swung at last to a ledge of a cloud I sat and I looked at the earth that I know Then realized the troubles that live down below When I'd rested enough from my head to crown I left my soft loft and I climbed the tree down I see things much clearer, from up high in the air I'm now super-hero who followed a star In my pocket, the rocks that used to be there Remind me that children need more than a tear To look to the sky when their world seems unfair If their worries come back and a nightmare is there I'll quickly escort them up heavenly stairs.... ____________________________________________________________ Super-Hero Contest

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Date: 10/12/2014 5:04:00 AM
lovely magical and heroic story. congrats Carrie.
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Date: 10/10/2014 12:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem Carrie.
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Date: 10/9/2014 2:09:00 PM
Excellent, Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/9/2014 1:44:00 PM
wonderful imagery many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/25/2009 11:08:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your win in Constance's excellent contest >> James,x
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Date: 11/23/2009 4:48:00 PM
congrats on the HM in the contest, wonderful poem!!
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Date: 11/23/2009 12:29:00 PM
A lovely poem, but I'm glad you came back to us. lCongratulations on your recognition. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/22/2009 9:22:00 PM
Congrats, Carrie, on your winning poem in the Magical Journey contest.. well deserved win for a wonderful write... happy to be sharing the same stage with u.. luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/6/2009 10:58:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest..
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Date: 11/6/2009 7:53:00 AM
Lovely and enchanting poetry and much good luck in the contest.. I am still working on what to write for Constance's contest myself.. when the words do come I hope it will as lovely as yours.. u are always so gracious with your comments and they are much appreciated... thankxxx... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/6/2009 7:41:00 AM
Hi Carrie, I love this one! So dreamy, smile. A magical journey indeed, one I'd love to take anytime. Good luck in contest though I don't think you're going to need it! Thanks for sharing. Love Light Patricia
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Date: 11/6/2009 5:38:00 AM
BEAUTIFUL STORY, CARRIE. A WINNER FOR SURE. THANK YOU FOR SHARING. LOVE, LAINIE
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Date: 11/5/2009 11:55:00 PM
Bes wishes with this one Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks you for your welcome comments today.
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Date: 11/5/2009 10:07:00 PM
Very nice poem...enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 11/5/2009 5:53:00 PM
beautiful journey! well done! Carrie! good luck in Constance's contest! jimbo
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Date: 11/5/2009 4:13:00 PM
A magical journey indeed. Great luck to you in the contest. This is a truly enchanting piece. Well done. Smiles from Lolita
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