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Standing Room Only

In crowded spaces, falling down: Toward the sky into the ground, And always landing "out-of-bounds" As I lie awake on sleeping sounds No room to dwell in Heaven's Hell, No lies confessed, nor Truths to tell The Demon's region, and Poets in legion- Oh! My words, forever quelled!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/20/2013 4:37:00 PM
Chan This is an interesting and deep write. Makes the reader think about what is being said in these words. Nice job Thanks for the protective comment in my Others Misery poem. I appreciate the care and love. Right back at ya. Hugs and Love Sweet Pea
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Date: 12/21/2013 8:06:00 AM
Much appreciated, Sweet Pea :)
Date: 9/20/2013 2:03:00 AM
This is a wow for me to. Great write....applause! : )
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Date: 9/20/2013 6:33:00 PM
A humbling review; many thanks, my friend :)
Date: 9/19/2013 2:05:00 PM
wooow...you truly have a beautiful way of pouring your thoughts out...wonderful piece of work...
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Date: 9/20/2013 6:34:00 PM
I appreciate the compliments, Fancy; thank you so very much :)

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