Stained With Tears

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She hates and keeps her distance True love is non- existence Betrayal harden her heart A young woman pure of heart Her heart just will not listen She fights that stirred resistance Promised they would not sever Now she’s lost him forever “Goodnight my sweet”, she whispers Fresh linen lie stained with tears No such things of true love kiss Stole the love she once did miss Her heart has fooled her all these years Afraid of dreams because of fear 11/20/2016 FOOL'S GOLD - Poetry Contest , . Sponsored by: Julia Ward

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Richard Nnoli

Date: 11/30/2016 5:35:00 AM

Hmmm this poem is emotional some times love hurts but we cant do without loving! Well written poem richard

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/21/2016 5:14:00 PM

Eve, this is very nice. If we win , we win, if we don't , we don't . I am losing so many this week, I am not even gonna care any more. Go ahead and enter it!!

Eve Roper
Date: 11/21/2016 8:03:00 PM

Thank you for the encouraging I will go ahead and submit... Hugs Eve

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/21/2016 8:45:00 AM

Sadly, I can relate. Betrayal will certainly harden a heart, especially twice! Love the poem, Mrs Eve.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/21/2016 7:45:00 AM

Tragic situation that unfortunately repeats itself many a time dear, Eve! A fine poem and message!

Supraja Kannan

Date: 11/21/2016 6:43:00 AM

Sad but beautiful..Loved the last line very much... Beautifully penned Eve... A 7...

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/20/2016 11:01:00 PM

This is so sad, I can say this has happened to say many men and women, and is sad to see, I wish I could cure the world of sadness and pain!

Eve Roper
Date: 11/20/2016 11:04:00 PM

So do I, it does hurt to see so many suffer Hugs Eve

Carol B.

Date: 11/20/2016 10:42:00 PM

Sure felt the sadness in this write. To be "afraid of dreams because of fear" Many people close themselves off due to being hurt in the past. So sad! This is a really good piece :)

Eve Roper
Date: 11/20/2016 10:47:00 PM

Thank you, Carol, for the visit and reading my poem :-) Hugs Eve