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Ssssss

I gave she snatched I asked she sassed I shared she stole I begged she snarled I smiled she spit I came she split My turn she skipped I caught but she sliped I agreed she'd shift I saved she spent I stared she snubed I lead she shoved I touched she spooked I rose she stooped I liked she sulked I'd hide she snooped I errored she saw I'm quiet she squaked

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/4/2013 3:51:00 PM
Love the play with words here John. This is a fun poem and very well done. love phyl
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Date: 7/17/2013 4:27:00 PM
Slipped and snubbed. :) A fun play on phrases John. Sometimes you can't win for losin'.
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Date: 7/14/2013 8:42:00 PM
Sssssmoken
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Date: 7/14/2013 12:53:00 AM
lots of interesting contrasts with those SSSS sounds. That was very unique!!
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Date: 7/13/2013 2:51:00 PM
Interesting work..Much thinking went into this one..Sara
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