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Below is the poem entitled Ssssss which was written by poet John Loving III. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I gave she snatched I asked she 
I shared she stole I begged she 
I smiled she spit I came she split
My turn she skipped I caught but 
she sliped
I agreed she'd shift I saved she 
I stared she snubed I lead she 
I touched she spooked I rose she 
I liked she sulked I'd hide she 
I errored she saw I'm quiet she 

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  1. Date: 9/4/2013 3:51:00 PM
    Love the play with words here John. This is a fun poem and very well done. love phyl

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 4:27:00 PM
    Slipped and snubbed. :) A fun play on phrases John. Sometimes you can't win for losin'.

  1. Date: 7/14/2013 8:42:00 PM

  1. Date: 7/14/2013 12:53:00 AM
    lots of interesting contrasts with those SSSS sounds. That was very unique!!

  1. Date: 7/13/2013 2:51:00 PM
    Interesting work..Much thinking went into this one..Sara