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Sitting at glen’s edge, pining the loss of summer and idyllic rendezvous - the noticeable disappearance of luscious granny smiths we cut in halves and passionately rubbed between a quartet of burning thighs to chill the desire - after the writhing ceased. Perhaps we spoke in similes, debating the darker part of dawn - the soft, highlighted slices of your auburn hair reflecting the sun's secret midday voyeurism - wispy strands of woven silk complimenting the texture and hue of imported burgundy wines erotically sipped, tasted and unintentionally spilled? Or maybe, we didn’t speak at all - perhaps our mouths were silently engaged in activities devoid of eating and speaking - and the perspiration exchanged was more essential than simplistic bands of knuckled gold; wet and wanting an invitation to the honey-scented catacombs of a private teardrop. The summer when two ambitious hearts beat loudly and became whole; we coupled and silently brushed our eyelashes against a lost era. A time when innocence was a forgotten commodity - and sincere happenstance could not define the validity of unconditional love; whereas our sodden lips remembered and conditionally did. Dedicated to and written for my sweetheart -Margaret.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/4/2010 6:40:00 PM
Big Congratulations on your fantastic win in Catie's contest, John! It's a lovely and inspiring poem filled with sentiments of Nostalgia and tenderness. God bless. Have a wonderful day. Kindest Regards, Andrew.
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Date: 9/24/2010 7:38:00 AM
sensual piece well deserving of a win, congrats
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Date: 9/23/2010 11:38:00 AM
Stunning poetry John, most deserved of it's podium placing in Catie's lovely contest >> James
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Date: 9/23/2010 5:35:00 AM
Congratulations John for your win in Catie Lindsey's contest "Love Notes". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/22/2010 8:52:00 PM
Lucky lady, Margaret. Very sensual poem, great win, John. Loved this line: silently brushed our eyelashes against a lost era. Andrea
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Date: 9/22/2010 8:17:00 PM
Margaret is a lucky lady, John. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/22/2010 2:13:00 PM
Congratulations on this super win in the contest, John
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Date: 9/22/2010 1:49:00 PM
Congrats John on your big win in the Love Notes contest .. a wonderful write my friend ...enjoy your big win ... with luv..
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Date: 9/22/2010 1:29:00 PM
Ahh....I remember this so fondly! I loved this poem, John....breathtaking and wonderful!!! This is "POETRY" !!!~ :) love, Carrie
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Date: 2/14/2009 6:20:00 AM
beautifully done, John!! congrats on your win! ~ Arany
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Date: 2/13/2009 9:30:00 AM
Congrats John on your win in Kristin's contest. Love, Shar
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Date: 2/12/2009 11:38:00 PM
Congrats on your success in Kristin's contest John.rgds Brian
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Date: 2/12/2009 7:43:00 PM
Ahh what a Valentine present Margaret has now. Congratulations and a big wooooohoooo, Laurie
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Date: 2/12/2009 7:34:00 PM
I was so amazed by this poem the first time I read it and once again today, in the winning poem section. This is so filled with passion and tenderness. Well done, as always...you are so remarkable as a poet! Love reading your works! Congratulations! Carrie
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Date: 2/12/2009 7:27:00 PM
Congrats.. its a beautiful love poem for your sweetheart ..
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Date: 2/12/2009 6:06:00 PM
John congratulations on placing in Kristin's contest - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/8/2009 5:37:00 PM
Passionate use of language here, John! I particularly appreciate the form and content; the concept of love being a living entity beyond mere flesh springs to my mind when reading this. Deep, personal yet undeniably universal! Warm regards, John.
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Date: 2/8/2009 5:13:00 PM
breathless... you left me. wow, I say with a slight blush!
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Date: 2/7/2009 7:13:00 PM
My friend John a masterpiece of woven passion and a story only told as grand as you can tell it. You kept me wanting more of this in depth love story as though as I was there myself watching.Just so lovely it made me melt. Love Laura :)
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Date: 2/7/2009 6:59:00 PM
Had to check this poem out again because it stirs the amagination to such degree. Anyway thank you again for the information and have a great day or night.
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Date: 2/5/2009 6:31:00 PM
Wow John this is just amazing - I do love and admire the way you pen out your words - You are an excellent poet - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/3/2009 11:02:00 PM
So beautifully written with the deepest passion and intimacy..so much love and desire expressed in the greatest form, what a blessing it is to have someone you feel that way about..Awesome write, love the wondrous imagery!!!God Bless you and best wishes to you in your writing*Tyesha
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Date: 2/3/2009 7:18:00 AM
Still an awesome write. Old style, old fashion romanticism. Beautifully done. Vince
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Date: 2/1/2009 3:23:00 PM
Such a wonderfully poetic write here, John!! I just love the line: "to the honey-scented catacombs of our private raindrops" WOW !!All the best to you and your Margaret!!
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Date: 2/1/2009 1:57:00 PM
Having trouble with my computer...so hope this comment goes through ...just want to say I missed this poem until now...but reading it blew me away! Whoa...you are truly amazing once again....hot, romantic, skilled writing at it's best! ....my oh my....
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