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Spring Unleashed

Rain rushed in like a concert audience. There’s nothing calm about Spring’s arrival. The specter gusts regrets and survival, Strip limbs for whips — a sore obedience. A path cut through, a cold subservience. The robin’s heavy breast with cheep revival.* A rose depressed in past Spring’s archival. Absence of warmth, enrages audience. A sip of dandelion wine — desire spurs wholesome cheat, complete with snowy seeds. Remembrance of unwrinkled hands - youth’s lore, A marshmallow on spit, and rosy fire. Enhance the peace and love of daisy beads. Unwind the twister’s coil, unleash Spring’s core. 3/21/2018 Greg Cornish’s Petrarchan Sonnet contest cheep - to utter faint shrill sounds : peep, to utter a single word or sound (from Merriam Webster dictionary) Also mimics the word “cheap”

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Date: 3/23/2018 2:01:00 AM
Beautiful poem, with a theme that covers the title so beautifully...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/23/2018 6:05:00 AM
Thank you! I appreciate your comment about the title, too!
Date: 3/22/2018 10:34:00 AM
Sipping the nectar of your poetry one is easily inspired dear, Kim! Good luck!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/22/2018 12:34:00 PM
Thanks so much, Demetrios!
Date: 3/22/2018 3:48:00 AM
Beautifully done Kim, wish nature would unleash spring on us, Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/22/2018 5:20:00 AM
Thank you, Tom! Me too! Still cold here!
Date: 3/21/2018 7:06:00 PM
Love it, especially the refrain/envoy. Wishing you success in the contest... Mick
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/21/2018 7:08:00 PM
Thanks, Mick! Phew...not an easy write :)

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