Spring Thoughts

SPRING THOUGHTS sing poetic rhyme investing nature’s green Dave Austin

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 2/10/2017 7:53:00 AM

Awesome acrostic!!! Congrats Daver, for having your poem featured in the Poetrysoup homepage!!! ;-)

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 2/10/2017 7:18:00 AM

Awesome acrostic!!! Congrats Daver, for having your poem featured in the Poetrysoup homepage!!! ;-)

Daver Austin

Date: 3/27/2015 11:01:00 AM

Hi, Maurice. I probably don't understand the form, but acrostic doesn't say anything about length of lines. My idea here was to invest the poem with Green. How are you old friend? Long time no contact. Will try to remedy. Love, daver

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/27/2015 5:28:00 AM

Maybe this needs its own classification or the rest of us don't understand the form. Excellent!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/21/2015 10:04:00 PM

hey Daver, are the days getting more a SPRING in them now? I can't believe how fast our trees have bloomed this year!

Daver Austin
Date: 3/22/2015 9:36:00 AM

Our trees are as dead looking now as they were all winter. I yearn for GREEN, GREEN, GREEN. Love, daver

James Peranteau

Date: 3/21/2015 4:32:00 PM

What a pleasant write ! I was wondering when one of these would come along ! I wrote an Aliteration today....feeling a need for diversity. Not that I could not be content with Freeverse. I was thinking today, to do a streem of Monoko's for a while for a book I intend publishing....or not. Have a wonderful weekend my friend......much love, james

Monterey Sirak

Date: 3/21/2015 8:14:00 AM

Your thoughts are blooming like the daffodils in my yard. Keep the thoughts of spring coming.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/20/2015 4:31:00 PM

First day of spring today and what do we get--the white stuff. lol Nicely done on this short poem. love phyl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2015 12:16:00 AM

hey, talk about a short acrostic!!! Now you gotta portray "thoughts!!"

Daver Austin
Date: 3/21/2015 10:14:00 AM

Thoughts are green, like GREEN! Hi, Andrea. Thanks for llooking in. love, daver