Spoilt Humanity Moulded From Suffering

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its like pepper spraying the eyes and looking at it from a soul point of view

Darkness begins it's work hiding within shadows creep moving away from the light tortured nature divides uneven inside this plague nothing makes something change path culling knowledge by brainwashing the masses sense the guilt Unreal acts out of bounds demanding human sacrifice first it attacks the innocent made in the image of God then it works it's way forward to the vulnerable bodies spreading this virus worse than a plague showing no mercy Consumed by hate weeding out souls in order of value those whom are deemed worthless by this state control when you cross the bones of Adam claiming supreme rights a journey begins with rotten apples poisoned by the snake Blind bats by their nature twisting with loveless acts corrupt the dragon has opened his fiery mouth once again with destruction heartless beggars crush the poor we all know the truth and on which side of it we stand

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 5/6/2020 5:45:00 PM

Hi Liam!:)) Very true, powerful poem, you've written,my dearest friend Liam. Wow!Very beautifully penned!Awesome!:))Sadly,we're living in very ungodly, evil,corrupted, dangerous,scary times.Book of Revelations unfolding right before us.But still we have God, Love Hope Peace Light Salvation thru Jesus!Lets pray for everyone, especially for all the blind, lost souls in this world!Your pens mighty golden!A fav!You have a heart of gold!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle n' sweet.I really hope n' pray a lot that you n' your very dear family are ok thru all this.Remember the Lords always with you!Wishing you always the very best in everything you do.Please stay healthy n' safe, Liam!Be positive n’ very strong!Always keeping you in my heart, thoughts n' prayers!Please keep your faith in Jesus!And keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/6/2020 2:34:00 PM

Those who have put economy over human life and dignity are going to pay a heavy price my brother Liam. An outstanding poem presenting reality in it's TRUE form. Wonderfully done . Blessings. Stay healthy!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 5/6/2020 2:44:00 PM

so very true dear brother, we are paying the ferryman for neglecting our duties towards our fellow man, you know me pal the bullets are fired in words, thank you so kindly for the heartfelt beautiful comment, stay safe i will add you to my prayers

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/6/2020 2:27:00 PM

As always, Liam, you sound your warnings brilliantly in service of issues you care about. The second stanza spells the essence of your write, though the entire poem resonates with intensity.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 5/6/2020 2:38:00 PM

smiling Vijay i am sounding the alarm from my heart in pen, thank you deeply for the heartfelt beautiful comment bless you always

Charlie Smith

Date: 5/6/2020 2:19:00 PM

Truth can be, and in to many cases is, tragic. Brilliant write Liam...

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 5/6/2020 2:35:00 PM

thank you so much charlie, tragic is the demeaning of something that comes to justice smiling bless you