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Spiritual Skies

In the universe lies the smoking gun For all eyes keep looking for they have none In spiritual skies we are but one For when one dies some believe we have won But we still hear the cries on Gods earth spun To the wise can you stop the damage done In our demise we can still reach the sun And to our surprise all can be undone. Aug.23.2016 monorhyme mania - Poetry Contest MUST BE A MONORHYME OF 8-12 LINES 10- SYLLABLES PER LINE Sponsored by: John Hamilton

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Sandra Haight

Date: 8/30/2016 8:43:00 PM

Lovely and well-written with deep spiritual meaning, WW. Congratulations on your fine placement in the Monorhyme contest.

Winged Warrior
Date: 9/2/2016 10:31:00 AM

Thank you so much Sandra...god bless...^WW^

Lu Loo

Date: 8/30/2016 3:30:00 PM

WW, beautifully written...congrats on your placement! :)-luloo

Winged Warrior
Date: 9/2/2016 10:30:00 AM

Thank you so much luloo...god bless...^WW^

Paul Callus

Date: 8/30/2016 2:39:00 PM

A lovely and meaningful poem, WW. Some fear death, little realizing that it is the start of a better life! Congrats on this fine win. // paul

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/30/2016 2:43:00 PM

Thank you Paul my friend...god bless...^WW^

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/29/2016 7:32:00 PM

Hi WW, I really enjoyed reading this written piece. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/30/2016 2:42:00 PM

Thank you so much Alexis my friend...god bless...^WW^

Lin Lane

Date: 8/29/2016 6:46:00 PM

Loved it, WW... congratulations on 8 well-rhymed special lines.

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/30/2016 2:41:00 PM

Thank you lady Lin...god bless...^WW^

John Hamilton

Date: 8/29/2016 4:29:00 PM

Great write WW congrats on your fine win, great rhymes as always!

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/29/2016 4:33:00 PM

Thanks, John...glad to have participated...on to the next...what do you have up your sleeve lol...^WW^

Kelly Deschler

Date: 8/27/2016 9:11:00 PM

A wonderful poem with such an inspiring message... We do need to keep our head up and look up more often... Good luck in John's contest!

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/28/2016 9:15:00 AM

Thank you so much, Kelly...for your lovely comment and understanding...god bless...^WW^

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/27/2016 10:16:00 AM

Beautiful poem! Love it!

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/27/2016 10:19:00 AM

Thank you, my friend, Joe...god bless...^WW^

Daver Austin

Date: 8/26/2016 7:44:00 PM

"In spiritual skies we are but one." This I believe. Strangely, not everyone does. Love, daver

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/27/2016 9:37:00 AM

Thank you so much daver...god bless...^WW^

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/26/2016 12:58:00 PM

Oneness in the spiritual world is God's truth to which we abide when the time comes. Great Monorhyme with messages so deep dear WW! Good luck and a 7!

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/27/2016 9:35:00 AM

Thank you so much, Demetrios...god bless...^WW^

David Smith

Date: 8/26/2016 5:49:00 AM

Well done. Very profound yet easy to get. Missed you for a while. Been busy campaigning for Mayor of my fair city. One of my daughters nominated me. Always wanted to make difference at some level. Fondest regards David in NZ

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/26/2016 9:12:00 AM

Thank you so much David...and best of luck in your political endeavors...let us know the outcome...and can you eventually replace Trump and Hillary lol...god bless...^WW^

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/24/2016 11:31:00 AM

Great entry WW, best wishes in the contest...

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/26/2016 9:06:00 AM

Thank you Charlie...god bless...^WW^

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/23/2016 3:58:00 PM

ohh, a divine treat with flowing rhymes, WW... take a bow!..huggs

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/23/2016 8:17:00 PM

Thank you nette...always nice to see you my friend...god bless...^WW^