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{spinning wheel}

spinning wheel.
round, round.
never ending.
your mind bending.
the wool turns to yarn.
from big to small.
circles over circles
stand still.
spinning wheel.
simple minded.
calm the mind.
work the fingers.
smooth thread.
rough ramouillet.
round, round.
spinning wheel.

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  1. Date: 1/8/2009 10:46:00 AM
    You are right. I did enjoy this. You might want to check your spelling though. I have a hard time with that aspect of writing as well. Thanks for the nice comment and for introducing me to your wonderful poetry.

  1. Date: 12/28/2008 3:37:00 AM
    Caroline,Congratulations on "{spinning wheel} being YOUR Featured POEM of the week this is a reminder of my youth when mom made our Christmas sweaters Welcome to the SOUP YOU are a valuable addition to the POETRYSOUP Family LOVEYOUr Talent...HG

  1. Date: 12/27/2008 10:01:00 AM
    Caroline - Congratulations on your feature this week! Wishing you a Happy & Healthy New Year. Peace always, John

  1. Date: 12/23/2008 5:07:00 PM
    Congrats Caroline on "(spinning wheel)" being featured. Vince

  1. Date: 12/23/2008 1:55:00 PM
    I like this, but how did igneous ever get into the wheel? HOT! Metamorphosis perhaps, change of physical form? Whatever. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver

  1. Date: 12/23/2008 8:47:00 AM
    Loved it the first time around! ;) God bless and congrats on getting featured! Happy Holidays! Amy

  1. Date: 12/23/2008 5:40:00 AM
    Congrats on being featured this week.

  1. Date: 12/22/2008 9:28:00 PM
    Congrats on being featured this week, Happy Holidays...Raul

  1. Date: 12/21/2008 7:11:00 PM
    Caroline - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week – Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 12/21/2008 5:37:00 PM
    Congratulations on this poem being featured this week! Well deserved! It made me think of the old Perry Como song...(I'm showing my age!) Happy Holidays!~Carrie

  1. Date: 12/21/2008 5:03:00 PM
    Congrats on being featured

  1. Date: 12/21/2008 3:59:00 PM
    Congratulations on your featured write of the week! Warmest wishes for a beautiful holiday! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 12/21/2008 2:24:00 PM
    This poem has energy. Nice use of alliteration. Congratulations on being featured this week. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 12/9/2008 10:25:00 AM
    Please take a look at 'The Morning Speaks With Skylarks Singing' if you get a chance... K. (parentheses... as good a reason as any! Good luck with your poetry... I'll be watching!)

  1. Date: 12/9/2008 10:14:00 AM
    Thank you very much for the wonderful encouragement! I am very new to poetry, So I wasn't sure how I did. Keith, I put the title in parentheses becuase I like how it looks! :0) And Amy, I got my insipration from my mother, she still "Spins" yarn, yes, it is still a thing people do!

  1. Date: 12/9/2008 9:50:00 AM
    'igneous,' 'ramouillet,' ...marvelous word choices. A propulsive flow, again with the '-ing' verbs. Why did you put your title in parentheses? ...just wonderin'. A cool piece! Best wishes, Keith (PS feel welcome now? I hope so!)

  1. Date: 12/9/2008 9:19:00 AM
    I like this, great visual! I love those old spinning wheels, reminds me of the one my grandmother used to have, as a kid I would love to spin it around and around, as you so well stated, hypnotized by it. Thanks for sharing and happy holidays! God bless, Amy :)