Soup's the Place

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This Valentine’s clandestine And hidden‘s every tryst Encoded rhyme, each one sublime he's sure to get the gist Love letter’s fly, the bold and sly In every line’s a kiss Don’t wonder why, no need to cry You’ll get your share of bliss The Soup’s the place, you'll find the grace Love thirsty all are we So let love go, let your Love know We’ll act like we don’t see! ;) Eileen Manassian

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/12/2016 8:40:00 PM

Loved this sweet rhyme! Hugs, and your poetry is beautiful and timeless! so there!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/12/2016 2:26:00 PM

Back for anther sip!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/12/2016 4:00:00 PM

Thanks for taking another sip, Richard. My poetry seems to be going nowhere fast. I don't understand it. I thought I was getting BETTER, but my older writes have more views than my newer writes??? Less friends? Hugs

White Sage

Date: 2/12/2016 11:28:00 AM

lol, we need not act like we don't see, because we are intentionally being shown, this is good for shy ones though...let your pen forever run gold and gems

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/12/2016 9:00:00 AM

Witty and sweet, appropriate for the occasion! Enjoyed, dear Eileen!

Paul Callus

Date: 2/11/2016 3:21:00 PM

Charming and delightfully sweet, Eileen! Love your ending:) Great to see you back in action. hugs // paul

Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/11/2016 2:27:00 PM

Great Valentine's Day poem. But my favorite is your ending line ... it's like "get a room" told in reverse! (now that's a first ;) ... And yes, it's good to be back!