Sounds

. The sounds Of air moving against water in jar moist oxygen now delivered The noise Second choice on list of Cinquain

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/5/2012 4:28:00 PM

Like the way your shifted your words like the air moving amongst your words. Unique write Sara. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/5/2012 2:44:00 PM

You do this so pretty Sara, well written. - oxox love // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/5/2012 12:50:00 PM

The beautiful way of delivery of noise of oxygen is penned. Loved and enjoyed it. Always, bl

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/5/2012 11:25:00 AM

What a graphical way to produce this write Sara! I really enjoyed how you went about that, the words also played well within the shifting, I loved this poem! Great Work!!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/5/2012 7:28:00 AM

Excellent piece Sara.... hugs Michael