Soul

The world passes by Hardly glancing at the hat Laid casually on the ground. I stop And drop a bill inside. It floats down in the breeze And the man plays on Hardly glancing at the hat Laid casually on the ground.

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John Heck

Date: 11/30/2008 6:15:00 AM

Tyler - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/11/2008 8:43:00 AM

Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar

Michael Jordan

Date: 11/3/2008 5:06:00 AM

Tyler - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/30/2008 6:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol

Daver Austin

Date: 10/23/2008 4:11:00 AM

Yep, Tyler, the world doesn't mean much to these guys, these forced eccentrics. There are other ways to make a buck, but they're into a different sort of thing. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver

Sue Mason

Date: 10/22/2008 6:24:00 PM

Love the title here, Tyler! Says a whole lot about our world! Congratulations on your writing being featured this week!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/22/2008 2:38:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

Date: 10/22/2008 7:14:00 AM

Nice flow in this poem. The repetition works well. Congratulatioins on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen

Michael Jordan

Date: 10/19/2008 9:35:00 PM

Tyler good for you - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week - God Bless

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/19/2008 4:40:00 PM

Congratulations Tyler on this wonderful little poem being featured this week. Love, Shar