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Song of the Evening

SONG OF THE EVENING In a lullaby song of the evening. In the background a cricket sings, corellas fly past, to their resting tree high upon silhouette wings. Red sky widens and covers the west with half sun glowing and gold, there’s stark contrast between heaven and earth as life in a pondage unfold. Bullfrog! Bullfrog! Clearing your throat, reed warbler should be going to sleep. ‘Sweet pretty creature,’ call of willy wagtail and crickets continue to cheep. In a lullaby song of the evening, new stars are beginning to shine, plovers’ static call fills the growing dim sky and the reed warbler's calling decline. So when the changeover’s completed, and day has now turned into night, these lullaby songs of the evening, are now hidden well out of sight. Bullfrog! Bullfrog! Clearing your throat, and crickets continue to cheep. ‘Sweet pretty creature,’ call of willy wagtail, the ringtail awake from their sleep. A red fox is yapping, then a mournful drawl, the mopoke hoots steady and soft. Radar pings in flight of the wattled bat echo with it flying aloft. A koala growls in the manna gum tops, a sugar gliders’ stealing its space, maned geese flying blind from dam to dam moan ‘gnow’ for the night to embrace. The lullaby song of the evening is dying, where hunter and hunted exist, for the art of survival is simply relying on mute vigilance in their midst. Bullfrog! Bullfrog! You are silent now, reed warbler is sleeping at last. Plovers’ are quiet, crickets no longer sing the moon in a stillness drifts past.

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Date: 3/18/2016 9:36:00 PM
oh tonight I have stumbled on one of your nature poems. You do both so well: the joking stories and then this kind, showing your love for the nature that seems to surround you in your country. Hope one day i can visit the land down under!!
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 3/29/2016 8:51:00 PM
Hello Andrea ... The vision for this poem came while spending time on a houseboat on the Murray River. So peaceful, and I'm sure you would love the time you spent here - Lindsay
Date: 4/17/2015 6:07:00 PM
Lindsay - my goodness that is a beautifully detailed poem about Australia's wildlife - I also like to write about the Tucson wildlife here - now it is growing with more houses and such - so I like to enjoy the wildlife while it is here. A very beautiful piece - may God continue to bless you and keep you!
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 4/20/2015 8:12:00 PM
Hello Susan... it appears that so called progress keeps on moving into precious wildlife habitat the world over so for many species designated parks will be the only place we can enjoy their charm. Thank you Susan for your comment. Much appreciated - Lindsay
Date: 2/25/2015 7:00:00 AM
Lindsay, I understand that Australia has the most diverse wildlife in the world. Your poem demonstrates that fact beautifully. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Bless you for sharing it.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 3/21/2015 7:03:00 PM
G'day Paul... Thanks for your comment Paul. It's funny you should say that Aus has diverse wildlife. Yet, I get fascinated watching shows from elsewhere with the wildlife we don't have. I guess regularly seeing kangaroos, emus, masses of cockatoos and parrots is taken for granted. Thank you Paul - Lindsay
Date: 2/10/2015 7:03:00 PM
I adore the way you write about nature, my friend!... Becoming a fan!!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 2/11/2015 9:07:00 PM
Hello Arlene... thank you for your kind comment Arlene. I'll certainly keep posting these nature observance poems in the future. I've been lucky enought to live in two contrasting areas. The dry and dusty outback and the lush Gippsland area, so there's plenty to see and write about. Regards - Lindsay
Date: 2/10/2015 10:15:00 AM
I love this great write my friend! Adding this one to my fav list and thanks.. A7....
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 2/11/2015 9:02:00 PM
Thank you Robert for taking the time to read and comment. You know I reckon there's a nature observance poem wherever we choose to sit and watch... and write of course. Catch you soon Robert - Lindsay
Date: 1/21/2015 8:05:00 PM
Brilliant write my friend, i could hear the music in my head as i read your words. Another 7 from me, We certainly live in a blessed Country. Shane
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 2/2/2015 7:17:00 PM
Thank you Shane. You are spot on. There is so much to enjoy in our blessed country and we don't have to travel from our cities either. Catch you soon Shane - Lindsay
Date: 1/15/2015 6:16:00 PM
Lindsay this brought back memories of my childhood we lived on a farm and you could hear the crickets, birds, coyotes, frogs all singing in the evening air. Your description of the evening song is excellent. love phyl
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 1/16/2015 9:57:00 PM
G'day Phyllis... we've had a cricket outside our bedroom window and it must think we like its chirping. Sunset is a really nice time on a balmy evening and the fauna makes it even better. Thanks Phyllis - Lindsay
Date: 1/4/2015 5:47:00 AM
Very nice! A lot of nature here and quite interesting! Could use just a bit of tweaking to improve the rhythm in places! Welcome to PS!
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 1/4/2015 5:16:00 PM
G'day Roy... Thanks for reading, commenting and your advice. It's a pleasure to be with PS. Read some great poetry so far. Regards-Lindsay
Date: 1/2/2015 6:49:00 PM
such brilliant imagery and I could hear all these sounds in my head you painted a great picture :-) Hugs jan xxx
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 1/4/2015 5:19:00 PM
Hello Jan... Thanks for reading and your positive comment. I was on a houseboat one evening at sunset when I was inspired to write this poem. Thanks Jan-Lindsay
Date: 1/2/2015 6:22:00 PM
Lindsay it sounds as though you are Aussie, that is one great poem my friend, you have captured our real Australia in it, great keep them coming, by the way what part are you from, take care mate............Vera...............
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 1/2/2015 6:32:00 PM
Hello Vera... thanks for your encouraging comment. Spent 20 years in Sunraysia, but now back in West Gippsland... a lot of the time enjoying and observing along the Murray and Bunyip State Forest. Catch you soon Vera-Lindsay

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