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Somewhere Some Quiet

It is very quiet tonight You are talking in the language Of twilight, Your river Hesitates to shiver However A swan shadow Molecules of el Dorado Sitting in your eyes Along with Nano crystals Of warm ice In a cool candle light It is very quiet tonight It is very quiet tonight In your eyes in dim delight A romantic starlight Weaving a magic of shade and light That so softly excites The honey flame Of our lyrical poem In this blissful quiet tonight We will try it We will see This glorious glee Of the edges Of our waiting sea Of our bends and stretches Our Cashmere graces Our purple presses So that The starry chat That we are at Will be lovely writ In the poem Of our wonder words Spoken and unspoken In the dream doors We have opened And our instinctive candle Lyrically lit ___________________________________ 23/12/2016

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Date: 12/23/2016 4:18:00 PM
Ah how sparklingly romantic poem dear, Probir! A seven my friend!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/23/2016 6:22:00 PM
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Date: 12/23/2016 2:55:00 PM
- Lovely written, Probir - Best wishes & Merry Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/23/2016 6:23:00 PM
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Date: 12/23/2016 10:43:00 AM
Lovely Probir:) Sounds magical!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/23/2016 6:24:00 PM
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Date: 12/23/2016 10:05:00 AM
Nice poem! I enjoyed the flow in rhythm.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/23/2016 6:24:00 PM
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Date: 12/23/2016 8:28:00 AM
Very nice Probir :)
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Date: 12/23/2016 6:25:00 PM
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