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Sometimes I Tire Along the Path

Sometimes I tire along the path— Colors not bright As they once were; Shapes in my hands Turning to water, Dribbling to indifferent earth— Her reply to everything The same stale belch— The temptation Is to believe That I have been lied to— By some great Oz Behind a celestial curtain, The cloak all traditional Illusionists wear— Pulling levers, Howling through a megaphone— In control, Freewill a plural-delusion— I pray For even a little star to follow, For a Bethlehem And a manger— Search amidst straw For lost gleam of light: “…we see through a glass darkly” A voice surfaces, That of the Dynamic Paul, Parting the veil, Grasping hold of my trembling hand Firmly lifting me—

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Date: 9/26/2016 5:13:00 AM
A benevolent sun always is shining even if, sometimes, is hiding behind the clouds of doubt! Very profound poem that passes multiple messages that only the adepts could perceive! A seven my friend, Joe!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/26/2016 8:52:00 AM
Hi Demetrios; your comment brings my heart great joy. Thank you so much, my friend. Blessings!!
Date: 9/24/2016 10:14:00 PM
Very nice Joe!! ( :
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/26/2016 8:53:00 AM
Thank you, Chelcie; so pleased you like this work. Have a beautiful day!
Date: 9/24/2016 8:10:00 PM
Great inspirational write Joe and thank God for the Scriptures to help us see the light!:)
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/26/2016 9:18:00 AM
Thank you, Cheryl. God condemns no one to an eternity in hell. We do this ourselves, and repentance for salvation-sake is never withheld--that is why there is an earth. Earth's beauty--God's Mercy. The ugliness of wars, our violent behavior. There is nothing we do not create ourselves...if there were, Freewill would only be an illusion. Oh what awesome power, we have been given...yet we live too often as indentured fools.

Book: Shattered Sighs