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Sometimes I stand at those edges
A part of me lost to the moment
Stepping away from flighty caution, I move
Spiralling towards them, like a firefly to the fire
Destiny rooming in from time’s attic, waiting to turn
Curving towards calls from the cavern depths
That infinity patterns in light
Looking down at my vulnerability
A silent dancer, dancing away
Moving through opaque lifetimes
Bowing through various incarnations
Sitting wisdom on it’s ancient seat
In its single abode, my life, my soul
At its heaving octave….

Sometimes I stand alone, at a lonely distance
Living in their dimension to raise lost vibrations, 
To pull back the veil, to move them to that light, 
My sole contract smoked at infinity’s hearth…

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  1. Date: 9/25/2014 4:01:00 AM
    In my comment on your most recent I asked if you had EVER written a bad poem? I was correct...

  1. Date: 9/21/2014 4:59:00 PM
    this was out of this world beautifully painted piece bindu really grasping how you drew this

  1. Date: 4/4/2014 8:26:00 PM
    Oh such is beauty hidden behind a thin veil of words discription, inspirational my dear friend loved it alot. keep them coming ok dear and i'll keep on read them. lol cheri thank you for your comment on my father's son by the way it was inspired by a real life person i work with a great and wonderful guy taking on the responsibilty of his whole family after his father died, and by the way he is handicappible, he has one brother and sister of special needs also, he's been doing this for 25 years.

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    Date: 4/7/2014 3:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, dear Cheryl. I love to see your comments! oh yes, what an awesome person your friend must be, there really are very few people in this world who can love so selflessly!! Hugs, dear lady! Have a wonderful week.
  1. Date: 1/13/2014 8:53:00 AM
    Such an inspiration you are dear friend...Much to reflect and ponder about here...Excellent..: )

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 9:50:00 AM
    Such introspection, in this beautiful poem. Like standing outside our own skin, and seeing ourselves in a new light. Love this!

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 7:02:00 AM
    ''Sometimes I stand alone, at a lonely distance Living in their dimension to raise lost vibrations,'' Loved the above two lines especially. Excellent work. I like it.

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 3:54:00 PM
    An amazing poem with very deep imagery. Very unique and interesting. I really like this poem. Really great writing, Bindu!

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 9:47:00 AM
    I like your surreal arrangement. Abstract to a point but still, concise and deep. Good work, Bindu! G.

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 12:35:00 AM
    Deep, and beautiful imagery, dear lady.

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 6:55:00 PM
    Now these are wonderful words, the edge is a great place to stand. I used to feel like I was almost there but a kind of glass wall stopped me from getting through, Used to be so frustrating trying to burst on through. I love the depth of this poem Bindue..The road goes on forever but it is wonderful journey.....Peter

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 1:04:00 PM
    - Beautifully described Bindu - really a deep poem. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 12:07:00 PM
    hints of eternity well rendered... i am always stunned by the beauty of your style, bindu... this one is no exception... fantastic..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 9:17:00 AM
    "Moving through opaque lifetimes"...stunning. Many deep reflections here. Beautifully expressed, per usual.