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sometimes i just miss you sometimes when i'm alone sometimes where time meets with memory and feeling regret that your gone sometimes i just recall you to your empty space and i almost perfectly remember your loved face sometimes it's joyful when you sneak in those little reminders that suddenly sink in and whisper your name as if out of respect though there is no reason that i'd ever forget sometimes i live a few moments with you though you can't be with me but i still cant live without you it's a funny thing sometimes i feel your alive alive inside my memory somewhere outside of our very short time

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Date: 1/13/2014 11:25:00 PM
John, this is so beautiful and touching. I can't help but feel instantly connected to you through your words, the way you capture the feeling of love and of loss. I read it over and over again. So bittersweet and sad, but I loved it! Warm regards, Cynthia
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Date: 9/22/2013 4:31:00 PM
...where time meets with memory...
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Date: 9/20/2013 2:00:00 PM
When those times come they do not come alone but bring the ache with them and we are defenseless! Well developed and marvelously expressed!
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Date: 9/20/2013 1:41:00 PM
This is very beautiful and touching...Yes...memories are what keep us alive....
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Date: 9/20/2013 1:27:00 PM
Remembering is very hard but it gets better with time but always will be there...Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/20/2013 1:29:00 PM
I enjoy the Japanese Maple with its dark red leaves or crimson leaves then there is the Yellow Maple that is so pretty..Then the lowly Sweet Gum that sometimes will have on it yellow, red, and crimson..Sara
Date: 9/20/2013 6:27:00 AM
So sentimental this is and yes those we lost will always find a way to be witlh us John..through soul.
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