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Altered state of consciousness 

SOMETHINGS GOT A HOLD I get this feeling it takes over, inside my head spins like like whirling winds. I get this look like being over-took by alien wordplay- Somethings got a hold. Wanting me to say which way the crow flies, wanting me me to tell -how the brook babbles. Why the bees scream why the sunbeams, why the moon streams why the daisies die. I get this sensation revealing revelations silent concentration and then laborious joy a new poem is born. Something has come over me extremely intense very extraordinary, dopamine released awareness increased. Somethings got a hold my pen is in control The secrets that unfold- Needed to be told-and now we see reality. Copyright © Vicki Acquah | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 9/25/2014 5:00:00 AM
You had a hold on me with this one, Vicki
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Vicki Acquah
Date: 9/28/2014 10:04:00 PM
Thanking you for taking the time to read and comment- helps a lot
Date: 9/25/2014 4:30:00 AM
May you always be under the spell of such hold , dearest Vicki, for we able would be quality work like this again in the future enjoy! Excellent!
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Vicki Acquah
Date: 9/28/2014 10:06:00 PM
So good to be encouraged by you always thank you.

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