Some One Knocks

Some one knocks my Hearts door by a call. I succumbed to find out the Caller is a light, Some brightness entering My heart,always trying to stay, But marred by dim darkness. Great bright light, Dim darkness, Knocking at my heart's door. Always in a wrestle, One must enter and stay, My heart's door, I must open for the Great bright light to stay. Stay,and make me bright All the days of my graceful life.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/10/2013 11:16:00 AM

Good morning, CHARLES;-) Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Have yourself a nice and sweet Sunday. ~Always & Forever *LINDA

Charles Melody Lightning Ink
Date: 6/24/2013 12:43:00 PM

OH1 thank you. i am just seeing it.

Daver Austin

Date: 3/5/2013 10:02:00 AM

I love this prayer to the light. Congrats on the selection. daver

Charles Melody Lightning Ink
Date: 6/24/2013 12:44:00 PM

thank u so much

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/29/2010 3:51:00 PM

This is a inspirational write Charles. You are waiting for a bright light to enter your heart. I feel this has a lot of meaning behind these words. Phyl

Charles Melody Lightning Ink
Date: 6/24/2013 12:44:00 PM

oh! mum, thank you so much.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/29/2010 6:30:00 AM

Like a light under a bushel??

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/28/2010 1:14:00 PM

Very deep meanings is this write but at the same time quite inspiraTIONAL, Charles