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Somber Is the Color of the Day

Somber is the color of the day... Window glass distorts the view, of the dreary afternoon Prisms of light cavorting outside, are reflected from the dew and rainbows are splashed, from an old pewter lamp as if to divert me of my mood While quietly, I sit, and ponder it all, my pen is close, my chin in hand Pinned back, my strands, a sweater, old, is pulled around the chill woven in colors, of various yarns, as varied as thoughts that take me away My mind is lost in a wakened dream While trees are tossed about in winter wind, and leaves lay dead beneath the snowy mounds a fire glows, and a storm now keeps me bound One shard of light from a neighbor's home across the hill, a distant mile The dimness in a room from winter sighs... then something sparks a word ...a line, .. a verse, ... a lullaby ... The day is sadder than the words I had found... so somber is the day that keeps me bound I hide away this moment....a cup of tea, a Golden Lab for company.. One peek beyond the distant hill, a touch of sun A glimpse of mountain, pastures deep, my dog that sleeps... A momentary chance to free my soul In just a brief, but deep departure from the ordinary... I explore my thoughts, search my heart, wonder what this day will bring... I watched old memories, long kept cold, ...unfold as if a dream Unsort, relive, those worlds untold.... Exploring new words, I now have found Stumbling through my mind, unintended Watching the words tumble as if unattended... Unfolding, exploding, and falling in chaos Paying no mind to the reader's conception Cleansing, pleasing, as my soul fits the pieces... Beneficial.... to the reader...will it matter? Who knows?... But a satisfying journey traveled and found by myself....and for myself, ....as the one who's creating... Looking out from blurry windows...a dark day continues ... on a somber colored day, that kept me bound..... _________________________________________________________________

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Date: 1/2/2014 8:57:00 PM
You seem a contented person too Carrie...a lovely poem...
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Date: 12/30/2013 2:45:00 PM
You know you have succeeded as a person when you do enjoy your own company, you never disappoint Carrie! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 12/25/2013 11:21:00 PM
as a bio of your thought processes and yourself as a poetess, this is truly an exceptional poem and I'd expect nothing less. Congrats on a very well deserved win!
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Date: 12/24/2013 6:10:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Happy Christmas Eve. Light & Love
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Date: 12/24/2013 12:07:00 AM
Enjoyed your beautiful write on a portrait of a poet and congratulations on the win, Carrie
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Date: 12/23/2013 9:23:00 PM
You are so talented, congratulations!
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Date: 12/23/2013 6:22:00 PM
Carrie, As I have said, somedays, are just that way, you just gotta tell it like it is. And it makes nice poetry in your minds eye. Congratulations and Merry Christmas!
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Date: 12/23/2013 2:23:00 PM
I can't tell you absorbing this poem was for me. You have put in words the progression of thoughts, feelings and ideas that often swarm in disarray within my mind and then collide. I'm keeping this one for a long, long time. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/23/2013 2:23:00 PM
I can't tell you absorbing this poem was for me. You have put in words the progression of thoughts, feelings and ideas that often swarm in disarray within my mind and then collide. I'm keeping this one for a long, long time. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/23/2013 12:16:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your fabulous win! Loved this beautifully crafted piece of writing.Thank you so much for your participation. huggs...G
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Date: 4/15/2013 9:26:00 PM
Carrie, a nice and awesome win... Congratulations with your awesome #1. I love many of Andrea's favorite poems. always~ Good Night* PD
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Date: 4/15/2013 1:07:00 PM
Congrats on your wonderful win... I actually enjoy reading your piece... well done.
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Date: 4/15/2013 10:43:00 AM
Carrie, Some days are just that way, but are worthy to record and share in this very manner. RAY
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Date: 4/15/2013 10:13:00 AM
A very interesting write that seems to at times reflect us all... in your work. Congratulations on the win!
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Date: 4/14/2013 10:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win with this mystic piece of your soul's reflections. Beautifully written Carrie.
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Date: 4/14/2013 6:04:00 PM
This imagery is so touching, puts me siting right there with you. J.
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Date: 4/14/2013 4:45:00 PM
Your free verse is so beautiful one forgets it is unrhymed. Lovely. No wonder it is one of Andrea's favorites. Love, joyce
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Date: 4/14/2013 4:24:00 PM
Breathtaking, Carrie, and flawlessly penned. Congrats!
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Date: 4/14/2013 1:34:00 PM
great write and win...congrats
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Date: 4/14/2013 12:19:00 PM
Wow!! I like, Carrie. Congratulations on your win, my friend. Nice one. :)
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Date: 4/14/2013 11:52:00 AM
Big warm congratulations on your grand win my dear friend Carrie! This is absolutely great and I enjoyed reading it tonight. I love it so much as well. Thanks a lot for sharing. love and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 4/14/2013 10:35:00 AM
many congratulations on your double win Carrie , first as a fave and now this xx
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Date: 4/14/2013 10:08:00 AM
wow! you've painted such a vivid mood in this poem that i could picture exactly every single thing you've described and the way each one made you feel. very well done!
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Date: 11/12/2010 11:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Carrie. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/10/2010 6:05:00 PM
This is a hansome one Carrie, congratulations on the way to second round. Agape, Moses
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