Soft Focus

Pretty as a picture, the blackberry blossom- summer retrospective of fall delights

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Carrie Richards

Date: 6/25/2009 9:17:00 AM

Wow..I'm thrilled that you liked my Septimal Fun poem about Elvis!! Thank you so much, Brian, for choosing my poem! Growing up during that time, I remember my own parents shaking their heads as they watched him shake his hips! This was a fun contest to enter! Thank you very much again, and for sponsoring all these interesting contests! It keeps me inspired and challenged, and makes the soup so enjoyable! Yes...my address and e-mail are the same, thanks!..Best Wishes, Carrie

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 6/23/2009 8:45:00 PM

Oh, this is very good, I like this form, you do it so well also...the anticipation of the fall berries..well done. ~Trudy~ also, you have soupmail. :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/23/2009 2:18:00 PM

i love your class Brian--it delights my eyes,pretty picture you've painted on canvas here--awesome--i admire your professional writes------------charma

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/23/2009 1:20:00 PM

Wonderfully written as always Brian. God Bless Phyl

Christopher Higgins

Date: 6/23/2009 5:33:00 AM

Wonderfully written...very colorful piece.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/23/2009 3:20:00 AM

this form is amazing, I must try it! and your poem is just delicious! so perfect for this form,( I like the way the lines fill with weight, then recede!) I guess you could say I like it! Brian! Jim

Charlene Bird

Date: 6/23/2009 1:10:00 AM

This is elegant, love the imagery and a nice title too!