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Soft Edges Free Hedges

The fog slowly creeps its dampness covers everything All of nature now fuzzy around its wet edges Fog settles like damp blanket 'pon the hedges Wind tossed pines' sighs float through the hedges The Dove's sudden coo lifts spirits of everything Still no red sun seen lifting gray from the edges Humans are confused_still damp around edges They seek a life of gratifying hedges Who don't want to work but desire everything They want free everything_soft edges with all hedges Inspired by Andrea Dietrich Contest: Introducing Tritina ( a new poetry form for you!) Written this 24th day of February 2013 Not an entry....

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Date: 3/2/2013 12:35:00 PM
great words you got up there Sara ;}
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Date: 2/25/2013 6:36:00 AM
Simply amazing!
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Date: 2/25/2013 6:36:00 AM
Simply amazing!
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Date: 2/24/2013 7:34:00 PM
I really enjoyed this a lot .almost felt like you you singing
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Date: 2/24/2013 1:22:00 PM
I read about this contest and this form. - (I think I must try it.) - I like your suggestion very much, Sara. - I wish you good luck in contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/24/2013 6:49:00 AM
This is an outstanding and wonderful write my friend! I believe that this would be an awesome entry into the contest, I guess you want to create another one to place into the contest? You have written a delightful piece, one that I enjoyed immensely Sara! What a fantastic poem, Great Work!
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