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Below is the poem entitled SO MANY WAITING TO BE SNATCHED AWAY which was written by poet Lyn McSweeney. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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So many waiting to be snatched away They don’t know they need to stay To be an example of how to live To be filled with Jesus His love to give Holy Spirit comes He lives in us Darkness has come there will be much “fuss” But Jesus in us brings hope to the world His Kingdom comes through His treasures His pearls We need to step out of the religious place We need to bow down to seek Fathers face We need to connect to His spiritual realm We need to march as one..Jesus at the helm No more rituals or similar things Just Jesus and the peace He brings So many waiting to be snatched away They don’t know they need to stay The earth being cleansed made safe and secure It’s time to stand it’s time to endure Time to shine His light on everyone So that they become His precious sons!!

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  1. Date: 11/3/2011 6:47:00 PM
    I can see a bit of Revelation in your words.So true they are :-) So many people think they are going to raptured up into heaven.If they would only read insted of just listen.Your works are all words of beauty that would put a smile on our Lords face. :-)

  1. Date: 11/3/2011 11:09:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading wonderful your poetry today Lyn. I am hoping for the inspiration to write something special. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and have a wonderful day. Love, Carol