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I told everyone, no more cats for me! After the death of Patches, I was shattered; I still had old Smudges, it was me and she, Oh, a little grey cat all matted and tattered. After the death of Patches, I was shattered, Snuggles came in a cardboard box howling; Oh, a little grey cat all matted and tattered, A plastic bag held bowls and toys for playing. Snuggles came in a cardboard box howling, It was love at first sight, I love her to pieces; A plastic bag held bowls and toys for playing, Running, leaping and meowing never ceases. It was love at first sight, I love her to pieces, Everyday she must check cupboards and closets; Running, leaping and meowing never ceases, Old Smudges and Snuggles run past me, rockets. Everyday "they" must check cupboards and closets, They both cuddle up against me when I sleep; Old Smudges and Snuggles run past me, rockets, With a sigh, they stay all night without a peep. They both cuddle up against me when I sleep; I still had old Smudges, it was me and she; With a sigh, they stay all night without a peep, I told everyone, no more cats for me! __________________________ January 18, 2016 Poetry/Pantoum/Snuggles and Old Smudges Copyright Protected, ID 16-746-887-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, I Love My Pets! Sponsor, Laura Loo First Place

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Date: 2/6/2016 9:39:00 PM
Thank you Broken... LINDA
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Date: 2/3/2016 11:36:00 PM
ha, anytime. I do my best. Linda
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Date: 2/4/2016 8:19:00 AM
Linda, you are a treasure !!
Date: 1/31/2016 11:05:00 PM
BROKEN, Congratulations on your sweet Pet win. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/1/2016 1:41:00 AM
Linda, thanks for the congratulations and the sweet, xox ~
Date: 1/28/2016 11:09:00 AM
Wonderful poem and congrats for contest win.
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Date: 1/28/2016 11:10:00 AM
Asim, thanks for the wonderful and the congrats !!!
Date: 1/27/2016 11:22:00 PM
How lovely Broken.. Congrats on first place win!!
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Date: 1/28/2016 6:50:00 AM
Upma, thanks for the lovely and the congrats !
Date: 1/26/2016 1:19:00 PM
Congratulations on a great win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/26/2016 4:25:00 PM
Joyce, thanks for the congratulations and the love !
Date: 1/26/2016 11:48:00 AM
BROKEN, CONGRATS ON YOUR LOVELY PET WIN. LOVE ** SKAT **
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Date: 1/26/2016 4:25:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 1/26/2016 9:44:00 AM
Oh Constance, so cute is this. How many times have we been shattered over the years, and have said the same thing I can't count! And same with our beloved dogs.. We never think we can endure the loss, but.........then......once again captivated by the heart !! Congratulations once again!
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Date: 1/26/2016 4:28:00 PM
Carrie, thanks for the congratulations, yes my friends know me well, I could not endure life without a little fur ball to share it with, and it takes just a moment to fall in love again and again, but does not diminish the love of the pet lost, never does it diminish that pain ~
Date: 1/26/2016 5:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your TOP win.
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Date: 1/26/2016 6:13:00 AM
Archana, thanks for the congratulations, so grateful !
Date: 1/26/2016 1:14:00 AM
definitely a fist-place winner, constance.. sweet congrats!
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Date: 1/26/2016 6:15:00 AM
nette, thanks for the sweet congrats, you are a treasure !
Date: 1/25/2016 9:10:00 PM
Well done, BW...another cat lover. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/26/2016 6:16:00 AM
Lin, thank you dear sweet cat lover friend, appreciate the congratulations . . .
Date: 1/25/2016 7:01:00 PM
Nicely done. You capture the joy of cat companionship.
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Date: 1/26/2016 6:17:00 AM
Steve, thank you for the nicely done, you must love cats to if you appreciate this write !!!
Date: 1/25/2016 5:02:00 PM
Thoroughly enjoyed. Great write, BW!
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Date: 1/25/2016 5:09:00 PM
Ralph, thanks for visiting, happy you enjoyed my write, you must be a cat lover too !
Date: 1/25/2016 3:37:00 PM
Oh, how this warmed my little animal loving heart..I love the form and the poem was outstanding. Thank you for being a part of my contest *smiles* -luloo
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Date: 1/25/2016 4:53:00 PM
Laura, thank you for a wonderful contest, and my awesome placement, I told Snuggles and Smudges but they were snoring, when I told everyone no more cats for me, they just laughed, sure they said, whatever you say...
Date: 1/22/2016 8:47:00 AM
Lovely write, BW.
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Date: 1/23/2016 12:13:00 AM
James, thanks for the visit and the lovely ~
Date: 1/18/2016 9:29:00 PM
I love this poem and appreciate the talent that went into the write. I am impressed, delightfully so ... CayCay
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Date: 1/19/2016 3:07:00 AM
CayCay, oh thank you so much for that lovely comment and the compliment, it is easy to see I love my Snuggles and Smudges to pieces !
Date: 1/18/2016 5:09:00 PM
Hey, life itself is a work in progress. I just wish only good and wonder for you and want to thank you for the effect your writing has on me. I really love reading your work.
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Date: 1/18/2016 5:59:00 PM
Duke, thanks for the lovely comment, please come back and read the finished poem, meow !

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