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Snowy Season

Our cold crisp air augurs an early snow before Thanksgiving. I need to look for my warm fur-lined gloves. The snow tires are heaven knows where in our cluttered garage, but they must be searched for now not later, when frozen fumbling fingers complain loudly from the cold. Every year at this time, daydreams of warm weather on a tropic isle are floating through my mind. floating blossoms drift like snow in the tropic wind— sun shines on sunscreen Back to the reality of the coming winter wind as our aging oak needs to be supported and protected. This beautiful season leaves me with such contrasting feelings of joy and foreboding. Our roof was just replaced from last year’s winter wrath. Every year I swear I will be more precautiously prepared. bright leaves fall from boughs leaving them naked and cold— north winds come early Grey clouds begin to dominate azure skies that turn into white-out days and I begin to pray while driving on the icy roads. I pray for the safety of all of us who must trudge traffic on these precarious pavements. Careening cars coming towards me haunts my sleep. Black ice threatens to come again, revisiting old fears of past years. nimbus clouds gather to darken frigid white skies— flurries soon flutter But then there is the beauty bestowed by blankets of snow covered trees and fences, tracing tree limbs with wondrous white perfect powder. An artist’s dream with a hearth burning bright inside, and outside the bright white of freshly fallen snow. Ice cycles cling to our eves in crystal prisms reflecting rainbows when the sun shyly appears. as snowflakes descend mirror lake freezes over— evergreens will bow What delight in watching my toddler with her nose pressed up against my winter window in such amazement of how her breath could cause the window to fog up, and how she can draw pictures with her finger on the frosty pane. A promised sleigh ride brings a smile to her face and to mine as we sip hot chocolate with marshmallows. The way she pronounces marshmallows is so sweet and will always remain in my memories of her youth. Snow….bring it on and I will stay warm inside with a favorite book reading rhymes to my little love in my lap. sleigh bells softly ring on an adventurous ride— winter wonderland Written: November 14, 2015 For Charlotte's "Creative Haibuns" Contest

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Date: 12/1/2015 9:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! I enjoyed every syllable of your delightful and captivating write. There is so much in it that I can and do relate to that I was truly drawn in ... CayCay
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Date: 11/28/2015 3:14:00 PM
Connie:) A nice and creative win. Love SKAT
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Date: 11/28/2015 8:19:00 AM
This win is truly merited, Connie. So pleased to be back with congratulations!:) Warm regards // paul
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Date: 11/27/2015 10:31:00 AM
A more beautiful tribute to the season could not be found, except perhaps in those window pictures done by the kids. Excellent imagery and style. Congrats, Connie.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/27/2015 12:09:00 PM
Thank you very much Dan. It is early morning here and I am trying to answer some poetry comments and also comment before my day gets too busy. Cheers, Connie
Date: 11/26/2015 9:41:00 PM
Wonderful pen Connie.. such captivating haikus rich in words..congrats on big win!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/27/2015 12:12:00 PM
Thank you very much Dr. Sharma. I am on my way to read all the haibuns I missed. I haven't read yours yet, but will shortly. Congratulations on your winning poem too!
Date: 11/26/2015 10:15:00 AM
excellent poem Connie love the imagery, the haiku and the alliteration - brilliantly penned many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/27/2015 12:21:00 PM
Thank you so much Jan. You know I am a fan of your work too. Cheers, Connie
Date: 11/26/2015 10:14:00 AM
This is simply fantastic Connie,that you could fill all the five haikus with adequate and beautiful prose is commendable; congrats on your worthy win...hugs
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/27/2015 12:16:00 PM
Thank you very much for your kind comment. It is so appreciated. Cheers, Connie
Date: 11/26/2015 8:20:00 AM
Awesome write Connie..I love your use of alliterations, Congrats on a great win
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/27/2015 12:23:00 PM
Great to hear from you Joseph. Hope you had a great holiday. Thanks so much. Cheers, Connie
Date: 11/26/2015 8:18:00 AM
this is another beautifully written haibun - there have been many! - some very good prose, and the haiku are delightful and complement the prose; that ending is so heart warming - congrats on your win in my contest!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/27/2015 12:20:00 PM
I am so pleased and honored to have this place in your top three Charlotte. This is my first attempt at writing a haibun. Thanks so much! Cheers, Connie
Date: 11/24/2015 6:43:00 PM
Hello Connie... not too familiar with haibun but gee they read well. Yours is a lovely story for me to imagine as we don't have snow where I live - thank you Connie - Lindsay
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/27/2015 12:06:00 PM
Thank you so much Lindsay. This is my first attempt at writing one. Cheers, Connie
Date: 11/17/2015 3:40:00 PM
wow, Connie, you covered a lot of beautiful snow covered ground with this one. Glad I finally got some time to read this. For sure, it is gonna be on the winners list. Why is this one so hard for me to do? I really need to settle down on my bed tonight and TRY it. And did you ever live in winters like these?
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/18/2015 10:57:00 PM
Yes, you know I was born in Kansas and used to visit family and friends there. The weather rules your life in Kansas. I also lived in Seattle where it snowed enough to build a snowman one year. The roads are the worst and I hated driving on the ice. I also flew to Denver weekly for a time and other places like Japan, so I have seen enough snow to know how fortunate I am to live in Hawaii. This is my first ever Haibun. Thanks Andrea. Good luck writing yours.
Date: 11/17/2015 11:31:00 AM
This is truly excellent, Connie! Lots of love and good work have gone into its making! I enjoyed it, and now I'll have to read it again to savour a lingering taste:) ~ Warm regards // paul
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Date: 11/17/2015 8:57:00 AM
This is so touching and so full of wonderful imagery! I love the "stream of consciousness" feel to this poem. I read it feeling as though these could be my own thoughts. Your haiku are also very well done and fit with the overall flow.
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Date: 11/16/2015 8:43:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your creative Haibun for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..I can just see the scenes even though I don't live where there is very much snow only about every ten years or so do we have a really bad storm..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 11/15/2015 1:05:00 PM
So, shall we focus on having to clean the window or the joy of a child's breath-drawing? Winter's danger or Winter's beauty? Me thinks the joy and beauty and me thinks your write concluded the same. (I don't know why I'm writing 'me thinks') I enjoyed this expression of struggle to focus on the positive. Great write ... CayCay
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Date: 11/15/2015 12:04:00 PM
Wow Connie what a awesome write on your poem. love phyl
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Date: 11/15/2015 2:08:00 AM
The mind blowing wonder and beauty of this season was all summed up and very creatively portrayed by your magical words through this difficult but amazing form my very dear friend, Connie. Giving you my Biggest Hug and Big Round of Applause to this one my dear friend. This is one of my dream forms to write in the future. I hope, I can make a try soon with the inspiration of this masterpiece of yours (with your loving permission pls). A Super Fave! Thank you so much! love lots, lots,Leonora
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Date: 11/15/2015 12:58:00 AM
Dear Connie What a wintery poem to read when the nights grow long this winter season, just love it a seven lady, perfect for this magical time of year, what a sheer pleasure to read, it gives the reader such delightful imagery, loved it totally, and thanks for your review on my sunshine's daughter I wrote it for my girls, and they both love it two, cheri
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Date: 11/14/2015 10:09:00 PM
I LOVE THIS!!! because it's wonderful and I LOVE haibuns too gl in the contest -LU xx *smiles*
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