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Snowy Morning

The exquisite pleasure of being the first to step on freshly fallen snow untouched the field spreads a white infinity like a metaphor for possibilities January 13, 2017 Contest 263 - Any form, any topic, max of 7 lines Sponsored by Brian Strand 2nd place

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Date: 7/24/2018 9:54:00 PM
Beautiful uplifting imagery Agnes.
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Date: 2/20/2017 7:45:00 PM
The wonder of your "Snowy Morning" - it's no wonder this piece placed so highly! Just beautiful! Congrats on your high placement and a 7! Best regards. Pandita
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Date: 1/17/2017 4:49:00 PM
It is a rare pleasure to be the first footfall, just as your poem is a pleasure to read Agnes. Congratulations on second place.
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Date: 1/17/2017 6:37:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jean.
Date: 1/17/2017 12:43:00 PM
Love this Agnes, congratulations...
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/17/2017 6:35:00 PM
Thanks, Charlie
Date: 1/17/2017 12:04:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Agnes
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Date: 1/17/2017 6:35:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph.
Date: 1/17/2017 6:53:00 AM
Congrats on the win Agnes, beautiful write! My only 2 cents on critique: In the last line, instead of telling us it is a metaphor, show us the metaphor (e.g. vast expanse of possibility, stretching forth in possibility, etc).
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Date: 1/17/2017 6:35:00 PM
Thanks for stopping y and for yur suggestion, Carolyn. I appreciate it.
Date: 1/16/2017 11:35:00 PM
Serenity and beauty infinite, congratulations, Agnes:)
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/17/2017 6:34:00 PM
Thank you, Jo.
Date: 1/16/2017 4:12:00 PM
Beautiful, Agnes. I love the untouched, serene imagery. Congratulations on your fine placement. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/16/2017 5:34:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra.
Date: 1/16/2017 2:33:00 PM
seamless in its fluency, agnes... so lovely in white!.. huggs
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/16/2017 5:33:00 PM
Thank you, nette.
Date: 1/16/2017 5:16:00 AM
Ahhh the joy of pristine snow. Lovely Agnes! 7 ; )
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/16/2017 5:33:00 PM
Thank you, Connie.
Date: 1/15/2017 11:29:00 AM
- Agnes, a great poem - Untouched snow is a beautiful picture :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/16/2017 5:33:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise.
Date: 1/15/2017 9:27:00 AM
yes! wonderfully expressed
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/16/2017 5:33:00 PM
Thanks, Jack.
Date: 1/14/2017 9:04:00 PM
wow, simple but amazing!! Love it, Agnes.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/16/2017 5:32:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea.
Date: 1/14/2017 2:19:00 AM
Love the ending... beautiful write Agnes
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/16/2017 5:32:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph.
Date: 1/14/2017 2:16:00 AM
Just as beautiful as the untouched snow dear, Agnes! A seven.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/16/2017 5:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, Demetrios.
Date: 1/13/2017 9:35:00 PM
yes. I dig this kind of write. short. sweet. and full of meaning.:)
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/13/2017 9:42:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by with your kind comment, Holly.

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