Snowflakes

Winter's first snowflake Gently falls upon my tongue Nature melts with-in Icicles forming Growing swords to frozen mounds Freeze pops of nature

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Suzanne Delaney

Date: 4/7/2013 11:33:00 PM

lovely images...like whiskers on kittens Love you and thinking of you.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/5/2013 3:14:00 PM

Nicely done on these two haikus. Well we had more snow today and this winter does not want to stop for us. The roads are in terrible shape and it is very slow to melt this year. I am ready for spring. love phyl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/25/2013 3:26:00 PM

this is very clever imagery. Especially the second one, freeze pops of nature!! Loved seeing these, my friend. how is the cabin?

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/14/2013 9:51:00 PM

A nice little gem you have here HG, nice to read some of your words. I hope you are doing great. God bless...

Debbie Duncan

Date: 1/18/2013 10:44:00 AM

Love the haiku ;} you have a great day.

Lynette Chachere

Date: 12/9/2012 3:31:00 PM

the beautiful arrival of winter.. even though it can get really cold, this season is still worth while. how are you, Harry? i hope your life is well. take care. ~Always&Forever Lynn

Constance La France

Date: 12/6/2012 1:10:00 PM

Harry, I lover your winter haikus, well done. Constance

Dan Kearley

Date: 11/30/2012 8:01:00 PM

Hey... Long time,no see? Freeze pops of nature. I like that....