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Snowberry tear

Snow falls down brushin pine trees,rain of ice build cold 
towers,pyramid peaks reach up high,Winter sky.Fingertips 
mold his face through the mist on my window,Scarlet petals 
spray perfume on thick shattered glass.Broken leaves leap and 
linger in green meadows of the past.On a frosty mirrored 
morning,logs on fire burn no flame,in the stillness twigs of the 
heart.Dried December berries,without any kisses,get carried, in 
a farmer's worn out cart.The wild wind blows and rustles once 
again,dewdrop stones engrave a snowman's cheek,another 
dawn, awaits the blissful Sunshine,to play music on gold harp 
strings,to melt freezing tears into glitterin streams of dreams

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  1. Date: 3/27/2011 8:17:00 AM
    Image filled poetry Celene, it's lovely the way you fill the page with it....:)

  1. Date: 3/27/2011 7:19:00 AM
    What a very vivid and engaging piece on winter this is, Celene-- really like each line you put in here and totally love your title for it-- a sweet write that is beautifully written as always-- hugs to you -- :)

  1. Date: 3/25/2011 3:13:00 PM
    This is just loaded with imagery, sweet Celene. Your writing is truly poetic! Very wintery this is!! Makes me long for that blissful sunshine to melt my sorrow!

  1. Date: 3/25/2011 2:25:00 PM
    Lovely visuals my dear friend Celene as only u can relate them to the reader.. a fabulous picture painted in your precious words my friend.. feeling the snowberry tear.. seeing the snow falling as we still have it here .....dried December berries, without any kisses.. so lonely without luv .. happy weekend.. Eric and Chrissie will be home Sunday..

  1. Date: 3/25/2011 1:32:00 PM
    I am happy to see you and your amuse quite activated, celene

  1. Date: 3/25/2011 12:32:00 PM
    A delightful read and thnaks for your comment on my poem "yellow fellow" I think the poem was quite forced and a bit silly. I did it at 3am as I could not sleep.

  1. Date: 3/25/2011 10:21:00 AM
    You always write from your heart, Celene. Although I don't imagine you get much snow in your area, the snowmen's tears can be found in our northern states now. Beautiful imagery, dear friend. Love you, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/25/2011 8:48:00 AM
    Wonderful images throughout this superb write...always Michael