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snow is falling, drifting, floating down like filigree I stand discouraged in my doorway, flower shopping bag in hand - perhaps, a cup of chamomile by the fire, warming feet Sijo January 8, 2013 For the contest, Sijo

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  1. Date: 1/31/2013 4:37:00 PM
    Constance congrats on your win. A great Sijo. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 11:22:00 AM
    Great contrast in these winning lines..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 5:49:00 PM
    How many time have I not stood in my doorway discouraged, undecided? Nice!

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 9:33:00 AM
    Beautiful and nice piece,Constance...Great write...Congratulations on your superb win in this contest...XOXO...

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 1:12:00 AM
    Awesome Sijo! Congratulation on your super win my dear Constance! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 11:10:00 PM
    A beautiful and moving entry and a great First place win! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 4:54:00 PM
    Constance...Congratulations in Rick's awesome "SIJO" contest. take care~PD

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 3:01:00 PM
    Lovely! Congrats.

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 1:48:00 PM
    I see rick agreed with me and gave you first place. YAYYYY and congrats for your well deserved win. ARe you doing ok, dear?

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 11:26:00 AM
    So melancholy and beautiful. Wonderful poem, dear heart!!

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 10:59:00 AM
    Perfectly constructed Sijo, the way you are a bit irritated by the inconvenience in the first two lines, then follow it with a peaceful warm feeling...congratulations - Tim

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 6:52:00 PM
    hey there girl, haven't been about in a few ticks so stopping by to read and say hi! Love this little gem, best of luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 4:09:00 PM
    love this beauty, Constance - no snow here yet

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 9:58:00 PM
    Constance, how are you doing, lovely lady!! It's been a while and I happened to see you commenting on someone's poem and so I clicked on you to find this gorgeous sijo. I hope it scores really high. One of the best I have seen.

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 4:52:00 AM
    Is like being there watching it happening. Wonderful writing! Thank you.

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 6:41:00 PM
    Know how you feel with winter upon us. Cold and roads are closed tonight due to dangerous slippery conditions around Regina. Wonderful poem. love phyl

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 3:56:00 PM
    You have painted a picture here. Nice to read you. Love, Mehnaz

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 3:21:00 PM
    This is a fabulous and wondrous write my friend! I am amazed by the incredibly stupendous poem that you have written! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and enjoyable piece this afternoon! What a impressionable poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 12:17:00 PM
    Hi Constance sounds like a winner to me, get those feet up, all the best Owen