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Snow Is Falling

 

snow is falling, drifting, floating down like filigree
I stand discouraged in my doorway, flower shopping bag in hand -
perhaps, a cup of chamomile by the fire, warming feet

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January 8, 2013

Poetry/Sijo/snow is falling
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Connie Gildersleeve Date: 1/31/2013 4:37:00 PM Constance congrats on your win. A great Sijo. Warm Smiles, Connie Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/28/2013 11:22:00 AM Great contrast in these winning lines..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats on your win..Sara Login to Reply

Abdul Malik Date: 1/27/2013 5:49:00 PM How many time have I not stood in my doorway discouraged, undecided? Nice! Login to Reply

Olusegun Arowolo Date: 1/27/2013 9:33:00 AM Beautiful and nice piece,Constance...Great write...Congratulations on your superb win in this contest...XOXO... Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 1/27/2013 1:12:00 AM Awesome Sijo! Congratulation on your super win my dear Constance! love/hugs, Leonora Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 1/26/2013 11:10:00 PM A beautiful and moving entry and a great First place win! Congratulations! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/26/2013 4:54:00 PM Constance...Congratulations in Rick's awesome "SIJO" contest. take care~PD Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/26/2013 3:01:00 PM Lovely! Congrats. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/26/2013 1:48:00 PM I see rick agreed with me and gave you first place. YAYYYY and congrats for your well deserved win. ARe you doing ok, dear? Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 1/26/2013 11:26:00 AM So melancholy and beautiful. Wonderful poem, dear heart!! Login to Reply

Tim Ryerson Date: 1/26/2013 10:59:00 AM Perfectly constructed Sijo, Constance...love the way you are a bit irritated by the inconvenience in the first two lines, then follow it with a peaceful warm feeling...congratulations - Tim Login to Reply

Thvia Shetley Date: 1/17/2013 6:52:00 PM hey there girl, haven't been about in a few ticks so stopping by to read and say hi! Love this little gem, best of luck in the contest. Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 1/13/2013 4:09:00 PM love this beauty, Constance - no snow here yet Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/9/2013 9:58:00 PM Constance, how are you doing, lovely lady!! It's been a while and I happened to see you commenting on someone's poem and so I clicked on you to find this gorgeous sijo. I hope it scores really high. One of the best I have seen. Login to Reply

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 1/9/2013 4:52:00 AM Is like being there watching it happening. Wonderful writing! Thank you. Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 1/8/2013 6:41:00 PM Know how you feel with winter upon us. Cold and roads are closed tonight due to dangerous slippery conditions around Regina. Wonderful poem. love phyl Login to Reply

Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/8/2013 3:56:00 PM You have painted a picture here. Nice to read you. Love, Mehnaz Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 1/8/2013 3:21:00 PM This is a fabulous and wondrous write my friend! I am amazed by the incredibly stupendous poem that you have written! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and enjoyable piece this afternoon! What a impressionable poem, Great Work!! Login to Reply