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Silently, white softness falls from twilight’s sky. Nothing can be seen or heard out on the street, Only wind, which moans as it is passing by. Warmed by fire, we cuddle in our sweet retreat! Written 10/23/15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/13/2015 5:02:00 PM
Lovely description of the snow from the warmth of a shared moment.
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Date: 12/11/2015 9:53:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea.
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Date: 12/10/2015 1:21:00 PM
ANDREA, Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*
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Date: 12/10/2015 11:53:00 AM
Congrats Andrea! *SMILES*
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Date: 12/9/2015 11:01:00 PM
Very wonderful write Andrea.. congrats on great win!
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Date: 12/9/2015 9:58:00 PM
Wonderful write Andres...Congrats on the win
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Date: 11/7/2015 1:41:00 PM
oh, i LOVE this. awesome
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Date: 11/5/2015 10:39:00 AM
I love snuggling up while watching the snow outside falling silently, very well done, warm regards, Laura.
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Date: 11/3/2015 2:08:00 PM
Beautiful imagery! This actually makes me excited for the first snow fall :)
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Date: 10/31/2015 1:22:00 PM
Wow...this is just so lovely... like the final line best. Should do well, Andie. hugs!
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Date: 10/29/2015 12:11:00 PM
Very nice, Andrea. Creates lovely images in my mind.
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Date: 10/28/2015 6:45:00 PM
A great Acrostic poem on snow my friend. A7 Good luck, I did mine on snow and I have to date, seen at least three other truly great poems snow alone! Contest will surely be a tough one to judge.
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Date: 10/28/2015 5:46:00 PM
Love this as it describes my love for Winter.
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Date: 10/27/2015 8:54:00 PM
Andrea, so peaceful and soothing, best of luck in the contest ~
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Date: 10/27/2015 5:21:00 PM
This is lovely Andrea.
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Date: 10/27/2015 11:22:00 AM
Cozy. I'll remember this one when winter sets in. Love, daver.
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Date: 10/27/2015 6:16:00 AM
I love this. You have captured one of the best parts of snow, the silence of its fall and the cocoon it seems to wrap us in.
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Date: 10/27/2015 5:30:00 AM
Nice, snug poem, Andrea. Fire is lit, now where have you put the marshmallows? Viv x
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Date: 10/26/2015 8:25:00 PM
We both did Snow! Simply beautiful, Andrea ... CayCay
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Date: 10/26/2015 6:33:00 PM
I am captured by the images so skillfully developed by the author and the passion and beauty of the words leave me with a warm cosy feeling. Emile.
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Date: 10/26/2015 2:24:00 PM
Stop the fight and ring the bell! We have a winner by a KO! Good luck in the contest, Andrea! This is a 7
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Date: 10/26/2015 12:58:00 PM
Andrea, you always write interesting poetry! Like how you did this, so subtle and deep.
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Date: 10/26/2015 8:56:00 AM
Yeah....followed by the scratch of shovels and the whirr of spinning tires....So thanks for giving me that special moment of quiet and warmth....
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Date: 10/26/2015 8:48:00 AM
What a dreamy picture! An interplay of cold and warm that lights the fire in the poet's heart! A seven, dear Andrea!
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Date: 10/26/2015 8:24:00 AM
Wow a double structure maintained,rhyme and acrostic,I'm just falling in love with your poems Andrea.Good luck.
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