Smiles

. they you say when your smiling whole world smiles with ~ when the ~ your point at you laughing point at you two or clowns smile 3

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/16/2011 8:54:00 AM

had to come back here Mitch for another dose of that big, happy smile ^_^-- I remember this very creative write, love it as much as I did a year ago-- wow a year has passed? Smiles your way again, thank you for the sweet comments! ^_^

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/25/2010 10:57:00 PM

3 mins?? oh wow! you are a speed writing demon, Mitch! I tried thinking of writing a concrete for this contest & came up with nothing! btw this smile of yours complements my blissful grins really well too ;)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/25/2010 8:36:00 PM

very nice concrete, Mitch :) must've taken a lot of patience to pull this off, but I think it paid off, you sure are getting a lot of smiles for it :) & here's another one ^_^

Date: 5/24/2010 1:43:00 PM

You had me smiling the first time I read this and again today. Congratulations on your win in Amy's contest. Keep that creativity coming! Wishing you ongoing success. Karen

Amy Green

Date: 5/24/2010 12:51:00 PM

This one had me cracking up! Congrats on your win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/24/2010 12:47:00 PM

How perfect Mitch ..to win with your signature signoff.. congrats on a winning design and words to match... u enjoy those sweet smiles u send everyone ...now sending a big "Sweetheart" smile back at u....luv..

Brian Strand

Date: 5/19/2010 12:45:00 AM

Brilliant work a picture indeed.Rgds Brian & Thank you for your kind words.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/14/2010 2:16:00 PM

Im in love with these smiles Mitch,,very creative..Charma..Im smiling..;)

Jay Loveless

Date: 5/14/2010 11:38:00 AM

(: i like this one alot nice job. and nice lips lol ~rainbow

Kim M

Date: 5/14/2010 6:49:00 AM

Clever and cute, Mitch! Your smile made me smile! (FYI: I will be going back to work with very little time to devote to Poetry Soup. During my vacation, I have enjoyed reading your poetry, and I will keep checking every once in a while, as time permits. Please notify me when you get the Rhymin Simon song posted on U-Tube.)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2010 8:28:00 PM

I am smiling at you Mitch, hope you are smiling two or three. Love the laughing line. I also enjoyed the space ship you,,i,,i,,mean smile you got their. Just pulling your leg about the spce ship. I know it is smile, hope you are doing alright. Have yourself a good one,..p.d.

Skat A

Date: 5/12/2010 6:44:00 PM

COOL WRITE, ENJOYED

Date: 5/12/2010 1:28:00 PM

You certainly have me smiling. Enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/12/2010 12:38:00 PM

Very cool Mitch .. good luck in Amy's new contest... this is different and original...glad u enjoyed my Two Too Square... luv..from the "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/12/2010 10:40:00 AM

Very cute, Mitch. Nice job with the form, too. My mom used to say, "Laugh and the world laughs with you, but cry and you cry alone." Thanks for sending in the clowns and giving us a smile! Love, Carolyn