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Sleepless Nights

troubled edge of dreams a voice clearly cries my name the voice of a child…

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Carrie Richards

Date: 7/23/2013 9:07:00 AM

Short on sleep........short form beats all !! :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/23/2013 8:04:00 AM

Less is more! Congratulations

Joseph May

Date: 7/23/2013 7:04:00 AM

congrats on your win with this great haiku Tim

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/23/2013 5:33:00 AM

dramatic in its brevity.. congrats on your super win, tim..:) huggs

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/23/2013 5:32:00 AM

dramatic in its brevity.. congrats on your super win, tim..:) huggs

Seren Roberts

Date: 7/23/2013 12:13:00 AM

Lovely thoughts Tim can be seen in different ways, maybe its your voice, crying out like a child for all to be as it was....Seren

Len Gasun

Date: 7/22/2013 10:16:00 PM

My huge heartfelt congratulations on your great win my dear friend, Tim.It’s an outstanding poem indeed which really deserved its shining win. Thank you so much for giving me your precious gem in my contest and for your support. Love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 7/5/2013 3:51:00 AM

Mysteriously intriguing. Just a repeat from the comments below..a very interesting senryu that really pulls on the reader. Or at least me...always, Laura

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 7/3/2013 11:12:00 AM

Tim an intriguing senyru. Thought provoking. Thank your for commenting on my 'Sleepless Night' much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Poet Tacito

Date: 7/3/2013 7:09:00 AM

Sad & intense. Hell of a dream to have...excellent work!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/2/2013 2:56:00 AM

Excellent!

Manel Gunatillake

Date: 7/1/2013 9:56:00 PM

Very nice Senryu. A bad dream?

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/1/2013 2:07:00 PM

I hope, not a nightmare? There is a sense of mystery here......your own voice ?

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/1/2013 12:21:00 PM

i like this, tim!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/1/2013 8:07:00 AM

I bet it is an actual child right there by the side of your bed asking to sleep by you because of his own bad dream. Nice senryu.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/1/2013 6:19:00 AM

so many ways this could continue very thought provoking good pen Shadow x smiles

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/1/2013 5:09:00 AM

Interesting work ...I could go several ways with the interpertation..Enjoyed reading this morning..Thanks for stopping by..Your visit to my work is appreciated..Sara