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Silly Sally scoffed six succulent spicy sausages Six succulent spicy sausages silly Sally scoffed Silly Sally succumbed to sickness! 11~16~16

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Janet Grace

Date: 11/26/2016 9:36:00 AM

You sure essed me to death on this one. I will have to look into this form of poem. All the same beginning letters. That will take some brainwork. Am I up to it? We will see!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/26/2016 1:15:00 PM

the style is called alliteration Janet:-) give it a go its great fun:-) hugs Jan xx

Dalia Shahein

Date: 11/20/2016 5:35:00 PM

Hahahahahaha, This is beautiful , different but great, hugs / / :)

Jan Allison
Date: 11/20/2016 5:43:00 PM

Thanks Dalia:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/17/2016 7:38:00 PM

great little tongue twister, Jan. Awesome picture.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/18/2016 2:16:00 AM

Thanks Andrea I had such fun with this poem - just a fun write:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 11/17/2016 12:32:00 PM

lol...I just sent Arthur an s tongue twister in response to his comment on my snake picture.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/17/2016 1:19:00 PM

ha ha ha - I wrote a tongue twister called Sally snake lol:-) hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/17/2016 11:26:00 AM

Scoffing six succulent spicy sausages silly Sally silently slipped away! Wow dear, Jan! Spectacular alliteration!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/17/2016 11:30:00 AM

Thanks Demetrios it only took a minute to write - i just love the gif image it makes me giggle when I see it:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/17/2016 9:24:00 AM

Hi Jan, Lol! This is such a fun tongue twister in the alliteration form. Great job:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 11/17/2016 9:27:00 AM

Thanks Alexis the gif is so darn funny - its better than the poem lol:-) hugs jan xx

Chris Boskovski

Date: 11/17/2016 7:19:00 AM

HAHA a very amusing write you have here, lovely. Could you check out my latest poem, "Something called LIFE" and please tell me what you think of it. Thank you, and have a good day

Jan Allison
Date: 11/17/2016 7:59:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by will go read your poem now:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/17/2016 6:35:00 AM

- Hilarious .... run for your life ... :))) - A 7, for silly sausage and you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)))

Jan Allison
Date: 11/17/2016 6:40:00 AM

ha ha thanks Anne Lise I had fun with this one:-) hugs jan xx

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 11/17/2016 5:51:00 AM

from image to date, what fun

Jan Allison
Date: 11/17/2016 6:04:00 AM

Thanks Scott its a silly poem which took just a minute to write the gif really makes me laugh:-) hugs jan xx

Jason Williams

Date: 11/16/2016 9:09:00 PM

LOL, so funny. My mind keeps wanting to interpret this one as erotic allegory, haha. ;-)

Jan Allison
Date: 11/17/2016 3:25:00 AM

If you ever see a 'sausage' that big do let me know lol:-) hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 11/17/2016 3:24:00 AM

ha ha ha. you and Darren are joined at the hip Jason lol:-) I guess Darren has told you all about me and my silly poems lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/16/2016 6:07:00 PM

Ok you trying to kill me? I just about choked to death, laughing at this! The Gif is hilarious!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/16/2016 6:21:00 PM

No chocking on that sausage Arthur lol:-) I thought of the poem as I was walking home from the shops .. no I'd not purchased sausages lol... wrote the poem and then found the gif and it made me LOL:-) hugs jan xx

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 11/16/2016 2:44:00 PM

Silly sausage very funny xxxx

Jan Allison
Date: 11/16/2016 6:22:00 PM

the gif makes me giggle Wendy:-) hugs jan xx

Barry Stebbings

Date: 11/16/2016 12:31:00 PM

Poor Silly Sally just can't get it right, lol. Fantastic clip. Barry

Jan Allison
Date: 11/16/2016 6:22:00 PM

Thanks Barry its fun isn't it lol:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/16/2016 10:10:00 AM

very funny and the picture is hilarious!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/16/2016 6:24:00 PM

Thanks Ilene I found it after I'd written the poem and thought it was perfect to go with my silly poem:-) hugs jan xx

Stephen Pennell

Date: 11/16/2016 8:54:00 AM

what a silly sausage you are jan

Jan Allison
Date: 11/16/2016 6:28:00 PM

ha ha ha thanks Stephen:-) hugs Jan xx

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/16/2016 8:43:00 AM

Wow Allison!! Methinks you're a learned master for sure in the "Alliteration Arts"!! The verses are silly sausage superb and the running rabid sausage runner in your posted picture is hilarious!! SEVEN/FAV!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Jan Allison
Date: 11/16/2016 6:29:00 PM

Thanks Gary I do love alliteration as a poetic device:-) I thought of the poem as I returned home from the shops (no sausages were purchased lol) when I found the gif it was perfect to go with the poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/16/2016 8:39:00 AM

Looks like Sally needs a bromo for that heartburn. I really love your alliterative humor Jan. another great tongue twister for sure.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/16/2016 6:30:00 PM

Thanks Daniel its a fun write glad you enjoyed it:-) hugs Jan xx

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 11/16/2016 8:15:00 AM

Esses are surely the best//So stoutly they stand up to the test//of sounding so silly//when Jan sings a dilly//so I snicker and snigger with zest! hugssssssssssssssses ~ j

Jan Allison
Date: 11/16/2016 6:30:00 PM

lol thanks John:-) hugs Jan xx