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Silken Quilt

Lugubriosity pervades Heartbroken expression 'pon maid War ready her armor clad knight The hem of silken quilt cascades Grieved like the maid who weighted prayed Doldrums linger 'til love's in sight
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Contest: Senses For A Sestet Written: October 30, 2013 Author: Sara Kendrick

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/10/2013 11:02:00 PM
Gosh Sara, you just get better and better...congrats. Bg
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Date: 11/10/2013 6:12:00 PM
this is wonderful work Sara...you captured a great feeling of emotion from that painting...congrats on your fine win :) Thank you for your visit to my poem
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Date: 11/10/2013 9:15:00 AM
congrats on your win Sara
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Date: 11/9/2013 6:43:00 PM
Classic write...Lovely piece...Congrats on your win in this contest,great poet....
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Date: 11/9/2013 6:06:00 PM
Great interpretation of the picture. I like how you wove in that quilt and caught the essence of her grief. Congrats for your win, Sara.
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Date: 10/30/2013 1:35:00 PM
You have delighted me by the splendor of this wondrous write this evening! This is a fabulous poem my friend! What a remarkable piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/30/2013 9:31:00 AM
Nice take on the contest form, sara
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Date: 10/30/2013 6:18:00 AM
Love that you used a form of "lugubrious" (I've always been fond of that word). Great piece from you as always, Sara :)
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