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Death's malodor dances with winds of lament heart wonders, mind ponders watching sunset lose her grace, time has become an adversary, pulsating in our misfortune, orchestrating a tragedy of love heart wonders, mind ponders in the hope of tomorrow, silence cries for my untouched lover. How unjust life would be if my last sigh was not in her presence heart wonders, mind ponders pangs of passion plead, to gaze into her eyes, to lose myself in her scent, to kiss the gloss of her lips, to merge like ink and paper. Devoted in an euphoric embrace, illuminating like a perpetual rainbow but Romeo's curse contaminates our destiny - her heart weeps, searching for a cure. Simple Musing Silent One 28 March 2020

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 11/20/2020 9:53:00 PM

A beautiful poem, Silent One. I love the way you integrated Romeo with this :)

Gideon Foli

Date: 5/2/2020 8:29:00 PM

The lover's heart is full of songs! What a lovely piece of work. Stay safe and enjoy your day my beautiful friend. Love and hugs.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/7/2020 1:08:00 PM

Can feel the longing of the heart for what could have been but was not. love phyl

Paul Callus

Date: 4/3/2020 1:45:00 PM

I can feel the longing, S-1. Time, distance and fate are main actors in this tragedy of love. Regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/31/2020 9:21:00 AM

You have skills Silent. Wow!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/30/2020 5:13:00 PM

Sad by dipped with tender words of affectionate. I hope she finds the cure, xo

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/30/2020 4:02:00 PM

A tragedy of love....very well expressed in these Troubling times. Beautifully poignant Silent. Have a great day! xxoo

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 3/30/2020 3:59:00 PM

Beautifully written!!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/30/2020 1:03:00 PM

A wonderful poem, my friend. Great artistry. Panagiota xx

Arturo Michael

Date: 3/29/2020 2:14:00 PM

"Heart wonders and mind ponders" the dilemma of these days...Nicely placed through the write...A true reflection of the times...Well done

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/29/2020 1:43:00 PM

I really enjoyed the comparison of this to Romeo's curse. Great writing, Silent One. So eloquent.

Juliet Ligon

Date: 3/29/2020 11:45:00 AM

It would be so hard to be separated from your love because of the virus. Your poem powerfully displays the tragedy. I love the Romeo reference.

Silent One
Date: 3/29/2020 12:32:00 PM

Thank you... It is difficult for those who are not together..

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/29/2020 11:19:00 AM

Separation is it's own disease, great work SO...

Silent One
Date: 3/29/2020 12:32:00 PM

Indeed... Thank you Charlie..

Maria Williams

Date: 3/29/2020 1:42:00 AM

Amazingly expressed Si, love the way your repeated line 'heart wonders, mind ponders ' adds more depth to the uncertainty of true to life situations played out in so many parts of the world right now. So many people are separated, so many lovers wonder if they will ever see each other again. Great song choice. A gem...Maria Hugs

Silent One
Date: 3/29/2020 12:42:00 PM

Thank you Maria.. who ever said love is easy hey..

Allright Poet

Date: 3/29/2020 1:41:00 AM

Sensitive and delicate. That is what muse is all about.

Silent One
Date: 3/29/2020 12:42:00 PM

Thank you..

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/28/2020 10:47:00 PM

Your thoughts caress this video perfectly. That sweet ache to be with the one you love- if the world should end. We truly have no way of knowing. Many blessings to you my friend. Stay safe. ~ Brandy

Silent One
Date: 3/29/2020 12:45:00 PM

fitting for today... thank you Brandy

Sandra Adams

Date: 3/28/2020 10:27:00 PM

this one made me think of some of the stories I have seen of those passing alone... so sad, but so true to life is this one my friend... excellent penning! hugs

Silent One
Date: 3/29/2020 12:45:00 PM

And so many are at the moment... Thank you Sandy

Joseph May

Date: 3/28/2020 5:19:00 PM

Romeo brings the 'tragedy of love', lost in destiny, Well written Silent

Silent One
Date: 3/29/2020 12:48:00 PM

Thank you... another love tragedy...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/28/2020 4:52:00 PM

Truly sad! We need human contact! Hopefully this will pass sooner than later!

Silent One
Date: 3/29/2020 12:49:00 PM

I hope so..

Jc Hawkens

Date: 3/28/2020 3:54:00 PM

Thank you Silent one for this beautiful read. I hope all is well with you.

Silent One
Date: 3/29/2020 12:50:00 PM

Thank you JC.. All is well.. hope all is well with you..

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 3/28/2020 10:49:00 AM

When the heart is anchored in an ocean of love and the mind weaves a net of a promising life.. then a howling wind heralds a mighty storm.. Our senses get infected and "Death's malodor dances with winds of lament".. So expressive amazing poetry, Silent One! You take your reader to the core of human nature when infected with the incurable! So profound thoughts of many a reading! Always a great pleasure reading your wonderful poetry.. stay safe. Best regards and blessings.

Silent One
Date: 3/29/2020 6:24:00 AM

It is love that is tested the most in these times... thank you..

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/28/2020 10:47:00 AM

This is so powerful and true for so many. It reached me deeply. Well written Silent One. Stay strong and please be safe. Keep on writing. You are talented and your poems reach many people. Bless you :)

Silent One
Date: 3/29/2020 6:20:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words... all we have is hope... be strong my friend..

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/28/2020 10:42:00 AM

Hello silent One, yes she weeps for a cure. I feel the sadness in this poem. Be strong, be well, Stay healthy. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/30/2020 8:27:00 AM

Hello Silent One, yes love can be sad sometimes. This is true. i agree. Keep well, be strong, stay well. Enjoy your day my friend.

Silent One
Date: 3/29/2020 5:10:00 AM

Love can be sad sometimes... Thank you..

Kelli White

Date: 3/28/2020 10:20:00 AM

Beautiful devotion in times of darkness love remains SO, love Kelli

Silent One
Date: 3/29/2020 5:09:00 AM

Thank you..

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/28/2020 9:59:00 AM

It's sad that in the coming days many who have lost a partner will pass on alone but for many they may see it as a release. Stay safe, a doctor in London is predicting a tsunami in the next few weeks. Two hospitals being built along with NHS Nightingale, Bham Airport being prepared as a morgue. Stay safe. Tom

Silent One
Date: 3/29/2020 5:09:00 AM

It will only get worse as according to doctors we have not even hit the peak yet... sad times... be strong and be safe my friend..