Silence

If one raises their voice and they were stripped of choice it’s profound~silence 05/23/2022 Alexis Y.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/7/2022 1:08:00 PM

A power write. In one line you said so much. Have a blessed day.............

Bill Baker

Date: 6/6/2022 3:29:00 PM

I like the message in your Monoku, Alexis. Write On! my friend. Bill

Paul Callus

Date: 5/28/2022 1:59:00 AM

Your monoku offers a wise choice of words, Alexis. It also has the luxury of internal rhyme! That profound silence is definitely golden! ~ warm regards, my friend // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/27/2022 9:31:00 AM

Profoundly true, Alexis.

David Kavanagh

Date: 5/26/2022 11:13:00 AM

My my ain’t that the truth Alexis! Is it just me or am I reading a little too deep into this one, should I take it up with the 9 judges, cheers David

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/26/2022 12:07:00 PM

Phew! Thank goodness, your monoku is quite exceptional, way to go :)

Alexis Y.
Date: 5/26/2022 11:38:00 AM

WoW! David, You are not thinking too deeply. I think you are the only one that got it. I appreciate your perceptive visit. Have a nice day:-) Alexis